how's it going (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Jason

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

"How goes it" thanks for the writing, its good to know Im not alone. You seem to have the words for what a lot of us feel. IMPRESSIVE

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Damn...this was just excellent, loved it so much,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

i've had days and weeks like that...i know the feeling all too well. let it out, let it out...outstanding write, i can relate with this today! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Intense writing. Feel better soon

Reviewed by Jason Wise

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

"the
heart is the thing
that
took the beating"

Loved those lines. wonderful poetry.

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

I wish there was something I could do. Since I can't actually be there, just know that I understand and I care.

Scada
xoxo

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Josie, wonder if you know how many of us have felt like this, only you say it better;-)...I know your over it already, your a spitfire;-)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

"heart is the thing
that
took the beating
this
time
how�s it going
don�t
ask..."

Well of course we're going to ask.
Get up off that floor !

Another good one from you.

~E

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

I agree with Bobbi steel boots and a uppercutter on the sam target....lol
Will be f.cked for live....
Love tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

deep and dark write! hope things get better for you; you are in my prayers, josie! love, your texas friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by Charles McKenzie (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

No one--fucking no one--fucks with Josie! The fuck with those who do.

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

life in a bottle
what doesn't kill us makes us stronger and all that bullshit

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Josie,
As always you express life as it is, and can be at times with zest!! You are one of the one's that won't be kept down for long! Your poetry is always point blank in your face! And that is what I enjoy so much about it!!!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

As my son, the former sailor would say, "When life kick you in the gut, GET UP AND KICK IT IN THE BALLS!" Note* Steel tipped cowboy boots work best. (hahaha)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

Tough love from Josie about Josie. I know the feeling, very well done.