fire in the sky (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

Jo this is awesome...I love the deep meaning in this one..Floria

Reviewed by Mom

Reviewed on March 6, 2003

This is very good. Tell her not to quit, it was just an unsettling day for her.
Keep writing. Mom

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

I was struck by the duel roles of poet and mother, each with only one time at bat and only our love and instincts to guide us in either endeaver. good job, Josie.

Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

Ah I loved this, I could see you both sitting there, bantering, only half listening and taking it all in, just the same.......great stuff!!!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

you say it so well, girlfriend

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

WONDERFUL WRITE, ENJOYABLE READING AND IMAGERY

WILLIAM

Reviewed by Ois�n Breen (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

all just humans humaning about arent we?

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

You are remarkable.
Ditto to everything said.

~E

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

beautiful write, with magnificent imagery throughout! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

*standing o* you said it, josie...you said it! BAM!! "i can't quit/even if i only play one inning/even if/no one reads my words..." WOW...BRAVO!!!!!!!! excellent advice...your daughter should be proud to have a mom like you. (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

Kids :) Ya gotta love em! Nice. Teresa

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

so who won the game?

Reviewed by Dee C.

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

So wonderfully written....I enjoyed this very much!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

Oh Josie, the fire in the sky matches the fire in your eyes. And I can just picture the glow and burning desire. You relate to fine expressions of love and harmony. A beautiful poem. Bill

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

Wonderful write, Josie. You must be such a good mother.

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

I love this....It is so hard for your girl. ho only wants to prove herself.. I coach baseball.. so I know how she feels..I try to get every kid in for a minimum of three innings.. How else can they improve..that said.. you painted a picture of a magnificent sky .. I long for that mountain... and NO.. Neither of you should never quit!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

Sometimes one time at bat is all we get.
I liked this piece, the form you chose reflects your thoughts... intermittent, halting, bouncing from one to the next. Very effective.
-James

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on March 5, 2003

Magnificent, Josie!! A slice of humanness of the highest magnitude! I love this! :)