wisdom drop poet
is that not just an awesome phrase or what
“wisdom
drop
poet
not a word wasted”
a compliment comment
to
me
now I know better than to get
carried away with myownself
I know all about big heads and
people just being nice
but
now
and again
someone says something like that
wisdom drop poet – can’t hear it enough
and
I get floored
wisdom drop
me dropping tidbits of wisdom
me
me not a word wasted
ha
o and here’s another
“you are a loveable poetess”
me loveable me poetess
I am rolling in the aisle here
ok
let’s get this straight
one – I have no wisdom
ok I knock out some words
a lot of wasted ones mostly
and I drop plenty---of bombs that is
and as for loveable
well
ask my kids ask my husband
I’m the mom that asks in front of friends
when was the last time you had a bath
I’m the wife that kicks the husband
Whose horse in a winning trifecta
got disqualified
what the hell is wrong with your horse
loveable
hardly
mean bawdy downright onrey
but
hey
I know how to take a compliment
o wait I got another
here’s a good one
"happy for you to get some affirmation
of your good work
that ought to shut you up for
at
least
fifteen minutes"
is that not perfect for me or what
shut-me-Up? hardly
aint gonna happen
till I hear the dirt on the lid
and then
this
whatever you wana call it
this
is just going to have to keep on
singing my song
long after I’m gone
but honestly
I
do
know
how to take a compliment
wisdom drop poet
ha
keep em coming
go ahead
“make my day”
credit comment compliments
“
Eileen Waldron Yeah! Happy for you to get some affirmation of your good work! that ought to shut you up for at least 15 minutes;-)luv ya!
Mark Rockeymoore ain't that the damn truth. wisdom drop, poet. not a word wasted.
Posted by Jim Corbin (author) at 4/22/2003 6:59:10 PM
'Course I do....you are a lovable poetess.... :)
thank you guys
see
i do know how to take a compliment
Josephine,
be it known from the outset, that I just lost my entire post quite lenghtly indeed! So my sincereity is unvileled in my retracing my attempt! Alas yes, the sincereity that drips from each critique! I apologise for my jaded ways!I now smile... My favorite remains "nice write!" For surely without finding these words ten times a day, sleep would never discover me at days end! Here is a critique you can bank on! your signature style is freshing and honest!
refreshing yes, I applaud the venture as well as the work. I think as well you have more serious writes as well in your heart!I applaud you being you this day, and standing tall in a world where few are themselves indeed! My compliments..and yes, I read several of your pieces today, though reserved my comments for this one only...
Sincerely
Rodney Evan Bohen
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 25, 2003
Ha ha ha. You are so very clever woman. I totally DIG your style. :) Teresa
P.S. I ask questions that turn a room full of 11 year old girls that want to be 16 RED FACED....ha ha.
So vivid. You're right in front of me saying this...
Reviewed by Heidi Klein (Reader)
Reviewed on April 24, 2003
I liked ... nice write.
Heidi
Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2003
Well, I'm kinda scared to give you a compliment. Is it ok to say I liked the poem as well as every other one that I have read from you. (Said while ducking under the desk)
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2003
what a trifecta? and i think you spelled ornery wrong uhmm other than that this was an awesoem response to their compliments you are always a brillliant poet
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2003
Excellent, Josie. We all drop wisdom once in a while. The greatest wisdom comes from little kids. We just need to listen. :)
HAHAHAHAHAAAAAA..you the very best rant rave like queen on the den...your writes sings to me...your style is just sooooo nice to read...you don't miss a damn thing while you sing (read)...even if you shut up for five minutes it stil rings in your minnnnnddd!!
lol...funny lady there, but it's all good. each and every one of us makes a wisdom drop sometimes, even if only by accident. lol! yours was purposeful, methinks, and indicative of deeper waters...i'm glad you were inspired, tho'! :)
(((josie))) enjoy your moments...because we enjoy what you have to say. don't care what you think of yourself...i'm kinda fond of you. okay, more than fond...*grins* (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) great write!
You are at your usual hilarious self today, aren't you. Tell me about this 15 minutes of fame? Who do I write to? [smiles]
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2003
LOL! I'm the opposite...I sorta think awwww shucks if someone says something really nice....hey though....gotta love that expression *writes it down* love your work....thanking you....Dani
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be it known from the outset, that I just lost my entire post quite lenghtly indeed! So my sincereity is unvileled in my retracing my attempt! Alas yes, the sincereity that drips from each critique! I apologise for my jaded ways!I now smile... My favorite remains "nice write!" For surely without finding these words ten times a day, sleep would never discover me at days end! Here is a critique you can bank on! your signature style is freshing and honest!
refreshing yes, I applaud the venture as well as the work. I think as well you have more serious writes as well in your heart!I applaud you being you this day, and standing tall in a world where few are themselves indeed! My compliments..and yes, I read several of your pieces today, though reserved my comments for this one only...
Sincerely
Rodney Evan Bohen
P.S. I ask questions that turn a room full of 11 year old girls that want to be 16 RED FACED....ha ha.
Heidi
Reindeer
Love this cute write..
Trixie :)
lol
Great LOVE
Tinka
Jim :)