tender of the bar (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Josefina,
R.E.B.

"so many voices so little time"

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

(((josie)))

"makes me want/to ask everyone i know/excuse me/do You write poetry" LOL love that...you betcha. :) excellent write, josie...and yes, i do LOL (((((HUGS))))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

What a delight Josie!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

Om Jo seems you and I are alike (always seeking out the bad boys :O)and funnier even still when I found a fellow talented poet it was within one of my rehab patients!
Fantastic Piece here Jo shows WE POETS DO COME FROM ALL WALKS OF LIFE!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

I had a guy tell me that one time, and my friend went home with him, I just had another drink, ....I think they live in San Francisco now and are very happy. I didn't know at the time it was a gay bar in Hawaii next to the International Market called "The Lemon Tree" I just thought, Gee, everyone one in here is so nice, but where are all the women in this town?

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

josie, small world out there. There are many with the same interests as us.

Reviewed by Sage Largo (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

What a delight, I have been in the same position with people I have been around a long time. Like who would have thought it?
All the best Sage

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Oh how much I loved this, I have been there..pretty amazing..

Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

Hi Josie,
"I
am
amazed
who would have thought
who could have known
makes me want
to ask Everyone I know
excuse me
do You
write
poetry
so many voices so little time "
this is so good
Thanks Peggy

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

a poet has no choice but to reveal him(her)self... and by doing so, aspire to inspire...

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

That is pretty damn cool and funny too.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

I know just how you felt. you seem so excited

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

LOL, liked this Jo.
I think our secret society needs a handshake, or maybe we can wear our "colors" to let the world beware....we are POETS!
Next thing you know...we'll be on the ten-o-clock news for another senseless drive-by writing.
-James

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

So many voices is right.
Many poets want to be anonymous
Probably for fear of being made fun of
I think being a poet, or an artist is nothing to be ashamed of
An enjoyable write......Thanks

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

excellent Josie! truth is it's easier to check those who don't because most people do love to rhyme, only they don't all follow through on it;-)

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on May 4, 2003

I see what you mean... I have met few who read/understand/ poetry.. write it!! LOL.. Wow.. You never know. As always you take something simple and brought great meaning to this write.. Open our eyes and our minds.. Perhaps we are all poets if given the inspiration.

Erica~~