shallow (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

Powerful write!!Hugs!!

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

You and Lady A have this way with bad words...I just LOOOOVE IT! I loved your emotion in this as I do all that you write. I often feel the same...and understand fully.

Thanking you,

Teresa

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

You are not shallow.. If you were you would have no introspection.. No ability to look at yourself and wonder... Powerful write!!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2003

What is there, is there, get past the inner censors and outer ones just "Be" and have the guts to write it down. You are far from shallow, Josie.

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

At the point where we "Don't give a "flying fuck" we do our best work because we can say anything from that point on. And shallow, hardly! Great rant, and great write!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

a flying fuck sounds so interesting ;)

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Josefina Maria,

if I could but know me
if I could but open the recesses
the pools
fling wide the door
usher in the pent up
the hidden the frightened the glorious
parts
there would be something of worth
yes?

shallow is as shallow does
keep the demons at bay I say
and one more thing
who gives a flying fuck anyway

Whatever works I say! Well done! Shallow...hmm....I think not. I retreat in yes smile!
sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Talk dirty to me baby!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

5-12-03

Really The Only Thing That Is Shallow Is Your Toilet,i.e. Like Most Human Brains_

You Have A Great Attitude...

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Um mahhh you said the freddy frog word...lol

Hey oh cool one....I agree with shadow writer...deep, deep, deep...Actually it's good to let the demons out for a spin every now and then....helps keep us honest...lol Excellent stuff Josie..Fair dinkum you're a cobba! <----that is er friend...Oz Slang :|

Thanks, Dani

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

is it necessary for us to say the f word in order to alleviate your insecurities than I will say, I give a flying fuck ! How's that;-)rotflmao...hehehe it's all your fault!(brought back memories of my ex's favorite expression;-)

Reviewed by Shadow Writer (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

hahaha, You made Karen have to repent... Well you are asking the right question... Now all you have to do is be satisified with the answers or change the answers. You are one of the deepest shallow people that I know.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

I care too, because you write what so many feel, and cannot express as well as you do here!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

i, too, give a flyin' fuck (LORD, i repent; please forgive me for saying the f word! :) ); i love your style! (((HUGS))) wonderful rant, josie! :)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

If you don't care, who will ? Nice rant.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

I love your honesty

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Josie, you know we all care * winks * Love your stuff.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

i do, josie...i give a flying fuck...you are ANYTHING but shallow...your writes reveal your soul...and what i see and read of it, i love...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Charles McKenzie (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

Love it when you say fuck