my hearts not in it anymore
silent of words
limbo
haze
waiting for the next onslaught
gut wrenching saga
continuing
never would I have thought
never would I have believed
that I am here
this chaos
and
somehow in the eye of the storm
as I watch pieces of my life
swirl
I feel the peace of the moment
wrapped
in limbo gauze
transparent
ideals of misconceived notions
that
what I thought really is not
and I delve deep
to the core
listening to the quiet
knowing the storm
is
not
yet
done
Josie,
Storms shall never cease I fear lass, yet peace still commands them to be still! Ah, but peace, where hideth she this day?
Keep the faith...and know that peace will reveal herself in due time lass, of this I am certain, for she is the last curtain call to every storm!
Good writing, good to see you back Jose!
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen
the storm always flows within our blood... superb pyschological tour de force...
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on July 23, 2003
((((Josie))))
So great to see your work again!
This is one write I can really at current time relate 100% to! Such a EXCELLANT PIECE to describe what we sometimes feel and go thru more often than not!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
i am feeling the same way you are, josie; i can definitely relate to this write! outstanding write; good to see you here again; we've missed you here at the den! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. :(
Hey, missed ya. glad you're back with your exceptional posts
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2003
Excellent to see you again Josie...Love the title!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2003
Wonderful to see you posting again. This is your usual exceptional work, Josie. Bravo.
Reviewed by Jennifer Hardy
Reviewed on July 22, 2003
Hey girlfriend...
I just found out about this site, and I am so impressed with your expessions...
You can really feel your feelings in all your words...what a talent.....this will carry you throughout what ever life throws your way...believe in yourself.
I miss you....feel for you....and hope you know that you can call on me...if ever i can help in anyway...
Jen
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Storms shall never cease I fear lass, yet peace still commands them to be still! Ah, but peace, where hideth she this day?
Keep the faith...and know that peace will reveal herself in due time lass, of this I am certain, for she is the last curtain call to every storm!
Good writing, good to see you back Jose!
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen
Reindeer
So great to see your work again!
This is one write I can really at current time relate 100% to! Such a EXCELLANT PIECE to describe what we sometimes feel and go thru more often than not!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
so glad to see you posting again! welcome back! (((HUGS)))
lately, this is how i feel...excellent write
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :(
Great write
I just found out about this site, and I am so impressed with your expessions...
You can really feel your feelings in all your words...what a talent.....this will carry you throughout what ever life throws your way...believe in yourself.
I miss you....feel for you....and hope you know that you can call on me...if ever i can help in anyway...
Jen
Missed you girl!!
Love
tinka