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Planes, Trains and Automobiles
by Paul Judges → (All Poetry by Paul Judges)
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PLANES, TRAINS AND AUTOMOBILES

The black soft-top sports car
abandoned to the icy night

its pop-up headlight eyes
frozen open in the morning light,

looking sweetly comical,
like Thomas or James

in the kids’ railway books
- such orderly games

where no real damage
is ever really done

and even the Fat Controller
is part of the harmless fun.

The little car was startled
by red sky in the morning

and the careful car driver
took it as a warning

that it’s safer to play
on pretend road and rail

there won’t be a problem
when the toy tracks fail,

or when a plastic Jumbo
plummets to the ground

with a noisy little boy
making the crashing sound.

The poseable figures
now tilt their simple heads

and in the pretty dolls’ house
they leap from tiny beds

dashing to the window
with a helpful, girly hand,

gasping at the carnage
on the moulded farmland.

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 Reviews of "Planes, Trains and Automobiles"
Reviewed on April 26, 2012
A great poem you have made a fan out of me after reading two of your poems, going to catch up on the rest now
In Christs Love
Michelle~

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
Reviewed on January 2, 2012
Plenty of thoughts in this poem. If only teenagers would remember their childhood stories and realise that Life is not a children's tale. Thanks for reading my poem.

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on December 11, 2011
offbeat and on target for a vividly drawn vignette in verse... nicely drawn

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 9, 2011
a bit of positive enforcement here Paul -- a good uplifting each day is a critical prescription for our heath and well being - thanks for today's dose my dear friend -- I bid you joy, peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on December 8, 2011
Loved being transported in your poem!
*Paul*
Thanks from such a good view!!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
A wonderful tale of childhood fantasies, woven together with Christmas dreams. Loved it!

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
Totally uplifting and cheerful poetry, Paul!

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
This has both a wonderful child like view and Christmas as well. It makes you enter another world, the one you have portrayed here. Took me away.

Reviewed by Janna Hill
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
Delightful child like view. Makes me ponder how we perpetuate drama and catastrophe even in our youthful play.
:) Janna

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on December 7, 2011
Paul, I enjoyed reading this. Reads very smoothly with a very good rhyme pattern. Helps get me in the Christmas mood! Thanks for posting and sharing.

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