Plenty of thoughts in this poem. If only teenagers would remember their childhood stories and realise that Life is not a children's tale. Thanks for reading my poem.
Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on December 11, 2011
offbeat and on target for a vividly drawn vignette in verse... nicely drawn
a bit of positive enforcement here Paul -- a good uplifting each day is a critical prescription for our heath and well being - thanks for today's dose my dear friend -- I bid you joy, peace and love -- Jon Michael
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
In Christs Love
Michelle~
*Paul*
Thanks from such a good view!!
Lady Vivian
Joy L. Hale
:) Janna
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