Who can catch the girl, Bounding and skipping Away from her brother Into a grimy stretch of Oakland Park Avenue?
He lunges; she dances Just out of his reach, Dismissive of his grasp, Oblivious to all else but The game that’s afoot.
Merrily, she leaps Into the street, Her fate freely given To chance that’s as blind As her unwary mind.
Unblinking eyes Study her every move; A low rumble is heard From the belly of a beast Approaching from the east.
The girl keeps prancing As her brother gets scared; He knows that at 35 M.P.H., His sister is easy prey For the oncoming van.
Another desperate lunge misses; The girl’s so into her game She doesn’t see how close She is to becoming a statistic Until the very last second.
I gaze down at the girl From inside my van and wonder Why life is so fleeting – So much promise can be lost With a leap into harm’s way.
It’s a blessing that this lesson Won’t be learned the hard way; I saw her carelessness And stopped my van Until she finally minced away.
I drive away smiling, knowing that The only blow she will suffer Is that which her relieved mother Will plant on her wayward backside For playing in the street.
Glad you missed the child, you write with honesty and candor; one doesn't just read your words, they are drawn into the lesson (or story) you are telling. Well done, my friend!
((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla. *kotc*
Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on June 1, 2006
Robert, your writes always come to life because they are..This one shined..Thanks, friend...
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
Glad you missed the child, you write with honesty and candor; one doesn't just read your words, they are drawn into the lesson (or story) you are telling. Well done, my friend!
((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla. *kotc*
Xxxx dove