Well you had me going Doug. Terrific imagery, and the ending was a mighty jolt. Great job. Michelle
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
"you sang my name
through an open window"
I love this line, it's like climbing on the roof to declare to the world, I love you.
"...to awake
in a long-lost
dream."
This line is a great twist... to awaken to a dream.
The whole piece talked to me and of course, another unique title that grabbed my eye.
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2004
Really quite a beautifully written romance. Love the way you word things through this..
Happiest and Warmest of holidays and all days.
God Bless you and your family,
Tracey
From the author of Jupiter Remembered and Until It’s Time: Embracing Life In Our Later Years comes Petals of Love: Poetry of a Woman’s Soul – a heartfelt collection spanning more than thirty-five years. Through tender reflections, these poems offer g
through an open window"
I love this line, it's like climbing on the roof to declare to the world, I love you.
"...to awake
in a long-lost
dream."
This line is a great twist... to awaken to a dream.
The whole piece talked to me and of course, another unique title that grabbed my eye.
Happiest and Warmest of holidays and all days.
God Bless you and your family,
Tracey
vividly penned ...
"you sang my name
through an open window"
I like this piece very much, thank you.