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A Sweet Bitch Slap Into Consciousness
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* The once-upon-a time love affair.


You  gently brushed my face

opened my clenched hand

took me by the arm

waltzed me down the hall

you sang my name

through an open window

You laughed

told me to take my shirt off

and dance

in your fragrant bohemian breeze.

 

And I was privy

to your private myths

that strangely misted my eyes

and then you hugged me

and you were

scented with inexplicable honey

you rubbed my barren, bald head

like a tailsman.

 

And for a time

charmed the taunting

nemesis that hunched

my back

 

And your love--

a violent

amorous attack

roused me

from a deadening sleep

to awake

in a long- lost

dream.

 

 

 
  

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 Reviews of "A Sweet Bitch Slap Into Consciousness"
Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on April 6, 2005
Well you had me going Doug. Terrific imagery, and the ending was a mighty jolt. Great job. Michelle

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
"you sang my name
through an open window"

I love this line, it's like climbing on the roof to declare to the world, I love you.


"...to awake
in a long-lost
dream."

This line is a great twist... to awaken to a dream.

The whole piece talked to me and of course, another unique title that grabbed my eye.


Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2004
Really quite a beautifully written romance. Love the way you word things through this..
Happiest and Warmest of holidays and all days.
God Bless you and your family,
Tracey

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
as long as the dream is long-lost, there's no harm to it ...

vividly penned ...

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
Great metaphors here, Doug. I especially liked
"you sang my name
through an open window"

I like this piece very much, thank you.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on November 29, 2004
sounds like a woman to remember


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