One more day
One more time
One more sunset, maybe I'd be satisfied
But then again
I know what it would do
Leave me wishing still, for one more day with you
~Diamond Rio~
LANTUNE FORM: inspired by those of Susan Sonnen
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After reading the comments already here, I don't know what more I can add about this lovely series of lantunes, other than to say that each one is a jewel on its own and together they combine to make a priceless necklace of pure beauty. Each facet reflects the immense inner beauty of the author.
~Butch
Where do you come from, Taylor? You must have poetry in your bloodline, I swear. Fabulous poetry.
Probably doesn't help much that the photograph you chose is also one of my favourites ;-) AND Diamond Rio just rocks my socks off.
I am so glad I found your work, Taylor. Thank you for reviewing mine so I knew to visit your Den. This is so incredibly sensuous and lovely. You are a master of the romantic ... well done. You are truly gifted.
My very warmest regards and respect,
CJ
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2006
Sensuous, seductive and sexy...absolutely sublime, Taylor!
Taylor, this is splendid! And no, there is no greater joy than to wake with someone with whom you are "in love;" no matter if the waking is literal or metaphorical. -- Jeff
...........Noooooooooooooooooooooooo.............. don't think so? You took each of there I'm sure... and now, no-one wants to leave! I shall have to look into lantunes - perfect in this usage: that of the looooooooooong, sloooooooooooooooooooooow touch. Just gorgeous. TY Kate xx
The perfection of this awakening is bountiful in passion and tenderness of the heart/s. The soft whispered words hum a lullaby of sensualness enough to make my dreams breathe a new hope.
Very pleasantly done dear Taylor. Now let's see you post more of this passionate facet glistening this evening.
Love your friend,
Susan
Preciously perfect dear Taylor!
One of the most attractive things in this entire world is a man vibrating with such potent expansive love!!
Oh the completion of you must be a wonderful woman!!
Love, Suzie :-D
Wow
Very sensuous and passionate series of magical lantunes
Each delightful one overlaps onto the next in perfect symmetry and synthesis..
Susan's format appears to be very well suited to your style and rhythm
of writing, and shows your literary and poetic talents to their incredible fullness..
I know the word "addictive" is not very liked in our society but the passion you describe to which I can relate is such as far as I am concerned. Thank you for sharing this offering, Taylor. Love and peace to you,
Taylor, I have to agree with Panda! The sensuous seductive beauty in each one is a joy which all together makes for a glorious love fest!You should do a book of love poems, you have it mastered!;-)...Eileen
WOW!
This was so real.
I thought that I was the only one bit by the love bug this week.
Stupid me!
Very honest write Taylor that peels back social veneer and exposes the goldmine that is tucked neatly and permanently in your heart.
I agree with Panda ... clever and also quite fulfilling! Like water flowing over rocks.
Kudos ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Rovena Tesfaye (Reader)
Reviewed on August 10, 2006
The rhyme, the reason, the tempo all blends to make a wonderful sense of being, in the right place, at the right time, one wakes with eyes open wide staring in the face of love. A stirring poem that captures the essence of love.
Oh Taylor! You clever, clever thing! Each in its own right makes such a fabulously emotive, sensual and beautiful statement - combined this is just exceptional! Don't ever say 'gathering dust' to me again! I love this and have kept it - your words ring home ;).
Much love my friend,
Panda :)
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~Butch
Probably doesn't help much that the photograph you chose is also one of my favourites ;-) AND Diamond Rio just rocks my socks off.
My very warmest regards and respect,
CJ
Tami
Start the day with a bang aye wot!!!
HEHE
Gorgeous write Taylor
Ty
Love Ch'erie
And that Diamond Rio song is wonderful, too.
Myrna
Susan
Peace,
Carolyn
Very pleasantly done dear Taylor. Now let's see you post more of this passionate facet glistening this evening.
Love your friend,
Susan
One of the most attractive things in this entire world is a man vibrating with such potent expansive love!!
Oh the completion of you must be a wonderful woman!!
Love, Suzie :-D
Wow
Very sensuous and passionate series of magical lantunes
Each delightful one overlaps onto the next in perfect symmetry and synthesis..
Susan's format appears to be very well suited to your style and rhythm
of writing, and shows your literary and poetic talents to their incredible fullness..
Love and Harmony
Peter
Regis
Sublime in feel and form.
Love, Rhonda
This was so real.
I thought that I was the only one bit by the love bug this week.
Stupid me!
Very honest write Taylor that peels back social veneer and exposes the goldmine that is tucked neatly and permanently in your heart.
I agree with Panda ... clever and also quite fulfilling! Like water flowing over rocks.
Kudos ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
cheers,
Rovena M. Tesfaye
Love Tinka
Much love my friend,
Panda :)