The Relationships (poem) by Judith L Bailey on AuthorsDen

The Relationships
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Relationship(s) are like dna... many strands.
The Relationships �Morning,� says he. �Morning to you as well,� mumbled reply. �Is the coffee done?� �No, slept a bit later today; and I�m sorry.� �Never mind, I�ll make it while you grab your shower. �Finding anything worth following?� �Not so far; still looking,� said she. The Voice spoke to both, heard as 'mine'. �You�ll only find what you seek from within. �You will not find it there in the computer, or on the lips of another.� �How hungry are you?� �Not at all. Are you hungry?� �I�m quite hungry; will you eat scrambled and toast?� �Sure will. Call me when ready.� Silence within speaks only to those who would listen. First one has to know what is truly wanted. *** Copyright by Judith Leigh Bailey/aka derwriter/aka derbeader April 3, 2006 All Rights Protected

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2007

Excellent, well done! Holly

Reviewed by David Arthur Walters

Reviewed on June 1, 2006

Judy, Thank you for your poem and for your social work. BTW, I keep addressing myself as "We" - I really don't know what kind of relationship that is, but I am looking into it. Any advice? David

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 23, 2006

This is certainly thought-inciting, Judith. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on April 30, 2006

I agree! Wonderful write.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 3, 2006

Oj Jufith! This is so great! I love poetry with dialogues. Very interesting indeed

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel -o/

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Striking inner soul in "The Relationships" brings a wisdom's bell to serve breakfast when ~the penultimate closing line~ shows that "Silence within speaks only to those who would listen."

A profound composition to stimulate ontological awareness.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)

unique and thought provoking.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

interesting...