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The Post Office Line
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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Pulling up to the post office


To mail a Christmas box


Walking in, to my dismay


The line was to the door


 


But I stepped up and all was still


Till in through the door, A large box in hand


Came a cursing and swearing fireball of ire


Disgusted with Shopping, and Christmas, and lines


 


I looked at her and showed my distain


Along with others there in that line


But soon, I thought better of who I wanted to be


I turned and smiled as she proclaimed to be Scrooge


 


We spoke for the entirety of our time in the line


I learned she was tough, a woman alone


Her house located in a rough part of town


Was finally almost paid off


 


So I stepped up, as it was my turn


To send my box of love on its way


But as I left, I touched her shoulder


As she thanked me for my time taken for “such a grinch”


 


 


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 Reviews of "The Post Office Line"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 30, 2007
enjoyed the read

Reviewed on December 8, 2007
Awww, how touching! You gave the woman love, she responded in her own way. The spirit of Christmas truly lives on; thanks so much for bringing me hope! Very well penned, Karen!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 7, 2007
Awwwwwwww
your good heart reached out to another, and in turn your uplighting story brings joy to ours :) pax A

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on December 7, 2007
Sometimes a smile & a show of caring can turn a grinch into a nice person...this poems shows an open heart is an open door to someone who may be hurting or in need. Loved it!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 7, 2007
at least she didn't go postal ...

good moment you experienced ...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
well done Karen...in keeping the heart open to all it encounters, you affect more than just the self...love this

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Nice and warm. We have to show them!

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
See, I love stories like that--the world all involved in their own selves, and then someone takes the time to crawl out of their box long enough to peep in some one else's --good things always happen. (but no peeping in my boxes till after Christmas!--I'm just sayin'...) --Charlie

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Yes, sometimes people just need to be heard... and touched. Our bile often does magically create space around us (I wonder why?!)... but, when we're hurting, like a babe needing swaddling, a human touch does more than bind up or mouths; it soothes our wounded souls as well. Neat write, Karen. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
I needed that..



Love Grinch

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Lovely piece, Karen! Doesn't it feel good to take the so called 'holiday stress' from someone with a simple gesture?
I love the spirit in this!
R~

Reviewed by Marilyn Rice
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Karen,
What a loving and kind reaction. For years I worked in retail and this time of year is so stressful to so many people. It's not always easy to smile and be understanding. I went to walmart the other day and had to return several items. At the door this elderly door greeter had to scan every single item then print off a ticket so that things would go smoother at customer service. One lady two people behind me seemed closed to having a stroke as she waited to bring one item back. I helped the elderly door greeter as best as I could, offering to place the stickers on the items and rebag them as she scanned the next. It didn't help matters any that she was having difficulty getting her machine to work well and the growing customer line was making her nerous. I almost offered to let the other lady go ahead of me but there was another lady waiting after me. So I smiled, appolgized to her and helped speed up my transaction as much as I could. Then when I got to customer service, where of course no one was waiting and the process was indeed going very quickly I discovered that the door greeter didn't have to tare off each ticket and stick them on each item. Boy was she ever greatful when I whispered this bit of infomation in her ear as I passed by her on my way out the door. I wish more people would understand that it's just a busy time of year and all the huffin and puffin in the world will not make the clock tic any slower or the line to move any faster.
Merry Christmas,
Marilyn

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Good..I am sure you touched some heart by youor reation!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
We sure can touch one with even a brief encounter,little gestures can make such a big impact. nice job
Christine

Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Great write, not only did you touch her shoulder you touched her heart.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
There is good in all of us if we reach out and find it. Great poem

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Sounds like that Grinch just needed a shoulder to lean on, and you did that very well!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Karen,

Stress and Pressure can do funny things to people whom otherwise would seem very calm and mellow. I admire you for taking the time to talk to her and try to bring a little peace into her life. Special people like you make stressful times seem so much less so. Happy Holidays My Friend and May God Bless You and Yours Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
It is so easy to get angry and lash out and it may offer some temporary relief but...

Like your small act of kindness to suppress anger and do or say somthng nice that changes another's attitude leaves you with a glow that will follow you around for a long time. Good lesson here Karen.
Hugs and Merry Christmas,
Santa Fee

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on December 6, 2007
Little moments build big things ~(evol <*>Ted)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
A little kindness goes a long way. I'm so glad you have taken the time to talk to this lady.

Sandie May :o)

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on December 5, 2007
Yes, often the kindness you give to a scrooge can be the balm that can heal their pain.enjoyed


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