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Gone
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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Gone


Built sometime in the 1800’s


Concrete walls and built to last


This home provided protection


And shelter for a newly arrived family


 


And over a hundred years later


And many families come and gone


I arrived on its threshold


Two small children in tow


 


I raised them there and a third one too


They roamed the fields and drowned worms in the canal


We rode freely upon our trusty steeds


And laughed and worked and cried some too


 


But now this home, and walls that heard so much


Is gone, just gone, not even a trace that it once stood


But a single rope hangs from the old maple tree


Worn thin by swinging children, proof that life was lived there


 


 


No longer the pastures or the marshy swamp


No children running, no horses or cows


For now where we lived and my children grew


Are dozens of new homes, the canal all dried up


 


I walked around and twenty years of memories


Flashed through my being—mostly good


But all that living, the good and the bad


Are sealed within me, though the walls are gone


 


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 Reviews of "Gone"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 26, 2008
Beautiful, I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
This is lovely. Evocative of times held dear.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
"They roamed the fields and drowned worms in the canal"
This line got me laughing Karen - its a real gooddun. There is a delightful, almost Rockwellesque, sentiment here that soothes the heart with its imagery and persuasion.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 17, 2007
We have to be thankful for all the memories we have, they cannot be stolen or lost maybe at times placed in a secretive spot. Well written Karen, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
very very well done. This touched me as I had a similar experiece last year. And as others have mentioned here, it seems every time I return home, a little more of memories become invalid do to "progress"
Splendid piece of work this is.

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Karen, you wrote this beautifully. I can feel the melancholy here. I feel the same every time I go back and visit Germany. Seems like every time a bid of history went away and got replaced with another huge piece of concrete.
R~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Just plain beautiful!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by ellen george
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
Beautifully written Karen!
You are most sensitive and elegant writer!
Bravo-
ellen

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
VEry nostalgically sad look at time and the memories we hold so dear. Our homes are so much apart of our lives and families to see them dissappear is always an ache in the heart but as you say they do not truly go we keep them in our memories forever.

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
Very intense poem Karen! Walls cannot keep memories out nothing can nor can they keep happiness in. We have to accept all kinds of changes in life and they are mostly a misture of good and bad as is the duality of life. Superb poem!

ET

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
memory lane; Bitter sweet.

Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
Loved this - you walked me through the past that was so much better than developed tracts. Wonderful memories.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
Karen, Memories are held sacred. They are yours and nothing can change or alter them. It is a good thing, that you can hold them in high regard. Beautiful poem
Peace, Love, and Light,

Amber "V"

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
Some things they can't take away. Great to have so many good memories. Lady J

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
As touching as this is clearly ~ I will add that the earth will not forever be & All shall be gathered & maintained onto another existence <>Evol*Ted

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
Karen a bitter sweet poem... You had such wonderful memories there, and I know how hard it is to see it extinct ,,,,
Great visions,,,took me back in time :)
Christine

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
You are fortunate, for a great many people those walls continue . . . I am in the process . . . Finally . . . Of tearing all of my walls down as we speak . . . Talking about a memoir . . . Shudder and gasp AND drat!!!!!

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
karen, i agree with stac, walls may be gone, but life remains within your heart and soul. our pasts build our futures even if building is not what we wish for. too much too fast is what we are faced with in this life. cherish your walls and they will always protect your memories.

randy

Reviewed on December 15, 2007
Poignancy in this one, Karen, sadly penned. Still, the memories build rooms of their own...well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Are you okay?????

Reviewed on December 15, 2007
Walls are gone but not memories they will always stay--lovely poem.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
For now where we lived and my children grew
Are dozens of new homes, the canal all dried up

So very sad, Karen. And this is sadly happening everywhere these days. I love old homes and old barns filled with wonderful memories, and almost all of them, will soon be gone.



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