Forbidden Love (poem) by Karen C Vanderlaan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 4, 2008

enjoyed the read

Reviewed on January 23, 2008

THIS is the meaning of true love. Beautifully done, Karen.

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on January 22, 2008

Very well done! A very hopeful piece of work. I can relate to the feelings here. Thanks for sharing.

Stay well and keep writing.

Ed

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on January 17, 2008

There is much one can learn from your poem, Karen...it is the depth of emotional and love enveloped within two souls who live and strive through the very trials of life...

now that's love...

nice work, Karen...

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 16, 2008

Working through it all TOGETHER is always the BEST way Karen!
This poem strikes a warm chord in my heart!
Give and Take, like a seesaw - back and forth between TWO!
Excellent poem! Uplifting too Karen!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo

STay Positive! In Love with Love and Life!

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

TAKE A BOW!!

The sum and substance of it all, excellent!
:) Ch'erie

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on January 15, 2008

As long as our thirst is quenched, we have no need to search for water.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

Your have captured the essence of true love.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece...and a BIG thank you for my book parcel...yip came today!!

THANK YOU!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on January 14, 2008

Love is love! It can be natured and grow, it can be powerful and all consuming. It is many things to many people and there are so many differnt kinds of love ...........M

Reviewed by Sheri Uy

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

When you go all the way, and not just meet halfway, things could be very different. I believe in giving your all but drawing the line when necessary to make a relationship work. Meaningful piece.

Be well,
Sheri

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

"Coming together in spite of disagreements
And with one another make and keep a life"

So beautifully said :)

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

How true Karen, I believe in my list of rules to keep a marriage strong and healthy, as long as the couple work together and not agaist each other anything is possible.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Oh my,so very sweet..just like you sweet lady...missed ya...Hugs stay safe and well

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Dr Phil says it is not 50/50 but 100/100 I think this is true.
Great write,, Christine

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

"It is those who, day after day
Work through life�s struggles and joys"...now there is the foundation of a healthy relationship. Great write!

Carole~

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Karen,

Far too many have lost the art of communication...I agree with Seed4Ever: no communication, no love. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Seed4ever D.

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Very true write Karen I say no communication no Love to communicate is to Love someone, this is a good communication Kisses Seed4ever

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Ahhhhh such sweet sensations of love and loyalty...

Fee

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

All beautiful glue here~evol_Ted

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on January 13, 2008

Very well done!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 12, 2008

Superb poem Karen, and I agree with your premise.BTW I watched the Quarterhorse competition on TV this evening, and thought of you.;-) I just love to watch the horses reining, and what a testimony to both rider and horse for their being able to work so well together,with such precision. They said it will now be included in the Olympics and I'm so glad!

ET

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 12, 2008

forbidden love is a passion that controls every fiber of one's being ... your poem explores such passion with depth and insight ...

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Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 12, 2008

The secret to a lasing love.

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 12, 2008

So true, Karen! You nailed this one, just hope we all have a better ending than Shakespeare would grant.
(Still snowing in Utah? I think I'll stay down under...)
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 12, 2008

This is true . . . There is a sence in this country that if one disagrees with the other they pick up the phne and call their shyster divorce lawyer . . . Is it fair to two people to NOT fight the fight for each other and give up and take the easy way out? . . . Is it fair for the children of these people to rip their yiung lives asunder, never to be the same again . . . Then again, sometimes one of the waring parties just walks away without giving a thought to anyone but himself . . . I knew of such a person . . .