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Pages of a life
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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I wrote this after reading jerry Pat Bolton's Misdemeaners and Felonies--an incredible experience, his story touched me...

Little Southern boy with a tow head of hair
Runs home for comfort to be told he is loved
Instead he is stripped and put into a tub
Scrubbed clean to blood by his faux mother's cruel hand
Turn the page

Adventures abound as the young boy grows
Fantasies to weave, and secret places to hide
But deeper secrets were so painfully hidden
And burned to the core with never an answer
Turn the page

Into his teen years, the mother so cruel
Dressed her son in bruises and bloodstains too
And the father who should have been the young man's hero
Cowered and  cringed in her heavy handed wake
Turn the page

Soon with signature to paper, to get the hell out of town
The army became his ticket, or so he had imagined
Discharged and AWOL, into a new hell he crawled
And he wallowed there, for a time at least
Turn the page

So lost and alone, in life's fight for survival
The boy was desperate, he needed to belong
But no one was there to give the foothold he needed
And those who reached out he soon left behind
Turn the page

As years march on, the boy more than grown
Can now find the good that was always within
He does all that he knows to make needed amends
Some questions still haunt him, though less of a burden
Now close the book gently-its not yet the end


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 Reviews of "Pages of a life"
Reviewed by Ed J.
Reviewed on February 2, 2008
WOW, Great job! The storyline was outstanding as well as the character developement. Abuse is all to common and difficult to deal with for years. I like the positive ending.

Stay well and keep writing.

Ed

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on January 31, 2008
Cleverly put. cheers

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
I thgought it might be necessary to have read the book to fully appreciate this Karen, but no, you have taken the essence of the story and condensed it into a few stanzas while retaining all the emotional impact. Well written.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
Karen you did a wonderful job of putting this sad story into such a few lines, All too often children suffer at their parents hands trying hard to please them and always looking for acceptance. It is good that he had so much good within his heart and soul. No child should have to go through this. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Exceptional write Karen! This goes deep into the heart and soul since we all can relate to his life,from one or another we have known.Some have it so hard,makes us wonder why the parents ever
had children. it seems to run in families...we should find ways to stop it.

luv,
et

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Wow, Karen. How sad this is, but I do see a little glimpse of hope.
Loved it. I'm glad you got inspired.
Becca~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
This just breaks my heart,,,Very well done.,, I will have to read Jerry's book.
Christine

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
You capture the essence of the huma spirit, looking for the love that gives life meaning.

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Karen, Wow, this is a great write...sad & heart rendering for a young boy to live such a life. Life can be savage to some children and they never have a chance to feel secure and self-confident. You've portrayed this boy's life so well.

Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Strong write, a great job you did here.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
So very "close to home" I think in
many ways to a lot of people (me included)
You can never seem to please your parents
and it does haunt me still today. I've
came to a point of just choosing not to believe
the lies I was taught. Throw out that garbage,
is my solution.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Powerful writing~`*

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Wow you "explained" the "book" of a lifetime in a few lines!!

Yip Jerry still has ALOT to offer....thank you for sharing!!

Lvoe Tinka

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Being a bit of an empath, I had to read this poem in pieces. You've captured so strongly the pain of a young child that I couldn't take it all in at once. Despite being grown, I know this little boy remains with him - as does unresolved pain. All this comes through in your words. You are very talented.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Very strong story with a good lesson in it as well...this boy could have ended up all wrong it was only his inherent goodness that delivered him in time.
Fee

Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Excellent write, Karen; well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Turn the pages...memories, barely touched on...and the strong ending. Beautifully penned. Well done, Karen.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Strong words that few would write. Another nice job. The positive message: It's not over until the END!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
You do know how to choke a guy up, don't you my friend . . . Thank you.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Karen,

I love the last verse. So deserving of gentleness with which we close the book. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
...your pages in verse...have penned a forward to ones life...from hardbound...to a softer cover.
excellent...
John

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
Karen, this is absolutely wonderful and I like how each stanza ended with "turn the page." The last stanza was my favorite. An excellent write, and a nice tribute to Jerry!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
A real gem of a poem Karen.

Reviewed on January 28, 2008
Wow, great poetic story Karen, enjoyed reading it, anyway it kind of reminds me of the poem I just did, "where we came from,"


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