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To Rest on her Hair
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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His eyes come to rest on her long, dark hair,
And remembered the ease with which she carried herself.
Remembering hit him like a soft autumn breeze,
Drifting around and through him, with just an edge of cold.

He remembered their first sweet kiss,
It was also his first, they were seventeen.
He recalled them holding hands, fingers well entwined,
And his hands wrapped wround her tiny waist.

In his mind's eye he sees her name by his.
Both names encased in a lopsided heart,
And etched into the grains of the old oak by his home.
His thoughts of her also deeply engrained, forever in his heart.

The boy, now a man, puts his arm around his sweet wife.
They speak softly as they rise to leave,
Of the plans they have for their soon to be born son.
He turns his eyes just one more time, to rest upon her
hair.

 

 


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 Reviews of "To Rest on her Hair"
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Oh, Karen, this is so soft, so beautiful. I love it.

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on March 18, 2008
I love the softness in this poem...
There are certain traits about my husband and each of my children that will always catch my eye and will be the things I remember and miss about each of them... eyes, smile, laugh, a head tilt, etc... you captured that thought in a poignant and beautiful way.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
Beautiful Karen. The poem flows well and I feel tranquil when i read it...M

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 7, 2008
This is a lovely soft romantic moment beautifully portrayed.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
Soft, romantic, loyalty. Good job!!!

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
What a tender loving poem. Thank youu so much for sharing it with me. Loved it, Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 6, 2008
...wonderful pen of long locks...remembered...and locks to secure the memory of one so loved...in ones eyes.
excellent Karen...
John

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2008
Yup, and Jill says it all.....

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on March 5, 2008
Stunning contemplating upon memories
Of the time their hearts become one
Outstanding vividness and imagery
I Love this romantic love poem!!
Peace Love and hugssss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 5, 2008
A beautiful write Karen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2008
Very beautiful writing sweet lady,stay safe and well...Hugsssss

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on March 5, 2008
very nice...Karen

thoughts that place reflection on the mind

nice...

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 5, 2008
BEAUTIFUL, HEART TOUCHING, SWEET WORDS!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 5, 2008
Another beautiful write Karen, thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 5, 2008
A truly lovely piece, Karen!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
Outstandingly beautiful wtite
Thanks for sharing Karen
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
I could really feel this one, it always amazes me how there are certain things about certain people we love that automatically carry triggers or reminders for us, like long hair, or a lopsided grin or even one girl who was a little cross sided but it actually made her look endearing. Anyway great write Karen.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
Karen, such a beautiful romantic poem...with images of a true love shared by two people who are serious about their situation. An excellent write. Hope all is well with you & yours.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
Splendid write on a softer side of love...

Carole~

Reviewed on March 4, 2008
Beautiful, Karen, nay, EXQUISITE!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on March 4, 2008
great love poetic love story Karen, hot cha

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
It just doesn't get better than this wonderful story of love and devotion, Karen . . . Oh, I think I'll try to get a book signing in Taylor, maybe at Harry Gaw's Cafe . . . Whadda ya think? . . . LOL

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
Karen,
This poem is a sweet reminder of the love shared as a couple, before the kids come, the love that can only grow once the children arrive, and the love that cannot cease but strengthen, once the children grow and become independent. Well done.

Thanks,
Jill

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
Lovable, Hugable, Kissable, Keepable! ! ! - Bill

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
Very Sweet indeed!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
Sweet moments well presented and shared, Karen. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed on March 4, 2008
awww a sweet poem.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
gorgeous details and emotions

Reviewed on March 4, 2008
Beautiful write, Karen; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. ;D


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