great down to earth touching verse Karen, now we know. I started working when I was about 10 years old. I feel you about being tired of the struggle, keep your chin up and your head will follow. hugs

Very sad, i have been there, it is good that you expressed this here so well, because you probably help others feeling the same-I hated always having to be the strong one, it does get tiring.

Karen, the honesty in this poem reminds me of times in my own life when I wondered if life would change for the better. It always did even if the outcome was not one I would necessarily have liked. My Grandmother had a saying 'it is better to be alone than to be badly accompanied.' That is a literal translation of her Spanish of 'mejor estar sola que mal acompianado.' Stay positive and strong.

God bless you. Kathy

It is in the asking, we are then open to receive what we long for...the honesty displayed here is beautiful...

try reading some of Byron Katy...www.thework.com

It take much courage to write as you have here, and there is nothing selfish about it. I applaud you for your honesty and can relate to what you say,having been there. Keep hoping and keep writing, your superb poetry!
Love,
ET

The honesty in this clarifies the longing in your heart. Never give up hoping!

Hey, i'll send my number...

I can feel your pain. The burdens do get heavy to carry, but somehow you'll find the strength to go on. God is near. Its not selfish to want to be happy... God Bless....M

Very sad and heart breaking...someday when you stop seeking, when you least expect, HE will put that one in your path...but remember no one will ever really get us except God himself. That is why your relationship with HIm is more precious

...your honest heartfelt pen here Karen...finds its voice in many of us. Goodness shines in your words...still the love of one...for you...is yet to be discovered in its brilliance.
all good wishes...
John

I loved this poem as it seeks to find one who wants us as we truly are and doesn't want to change a single thing! that is true acceptance and love! great job

Awwwww see you are searching for your pink too....sighhhhh!!

Wish I knew how to ride a horse...then I would say lets go for a long ride..atop the hills and scream it out to the world.....and laugh our asses off after that for still believing in miracles!!

Love Tinka

Bless you, Karen. And I don't see what's so selfish about this. Many of us can identify, I'm sure, and you speak for everyone to some extent. To find "that other" whom your heart seeks seems a natural quest for those who, for whatever reason, find themselves feeling they have walked a solitary path through life. Even those of us seemingly "matched" can experience this aloneness. And when things have been tough, or life has just caught up with you or been compounded over many years, then these feelings can become overpowering and intense. Thank you for sharing this. It's a kind of blood-letting that can bring relief to others as well as to yourself. We can share your sense of "alone". TY Kate xx

Though you may consider it selfish, I think it's the most natural thing to want. Having read some of your stories and poems now, I can see you have a truly loving heart and you really deserve a good love.
It may seem foolish to quote a movie such as the Wizard of Oz, but remember when the "wizard" told the Tinman,
"A heart is not judged by how much you love; but by how much you are loved by others."
You are loved by others, the ones who fall for you when they read your stories and poems, your creations. But, we all understand you need that loving touch, too. I'm sure you'll find it.
Terry

Why selfish? I don't think it is selfish to want someone. Who doesn't need someone? It is natural and very normal. Let's see it that way. And we know WHO the great Helper is, don't we? We must ask.

All they have to do to deserve you and understand you is to read what you write. It's all there for the world to see. What a catch. Love, Bonnie

Karen,
I so know how this feels, but for some reason, the Universe has chosen not to send that person to either of us yet. We have more to do in this life, and soon we both will get our chance at love. You are a beautiful soul, do me a favor, when you are feeling that sad at night, don't cry, think of something that makes you smile and say to yourself, now this is how I want to feel all the time. Soon the sadness will be replaced with contentment and peace.
Love your poem,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Something we all truly long for, deep in our hearts and souls.

Karen we not only long for this kind of relationship but we deserve it and this is how it should be. A great write. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

I LOVE YOUR POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Karen...an emotional write...and I understand what you have written here so well...feel like that myslef at times. Beautifully expressed.

Sometimes it is a better pain
To live with one and to love feign
Than to live with ones hurts and fears
Alone, alone, in your own sphere.

Lonliness is not part of the human condition, we are meant to have someone and to share the warmth of the body as well as the feelings of the heart. This poem tugs at the heartstrings of a romantic.

Fee

I feel the same way tears just seem to fall whenever
Loneliness takes over me and long to be loved!!
Beautifully writing and expressed longing
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Light to you my friend....Morning star

A longing poem of desires ,, well done Karen!

(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karen - powerfully written.

Karla. :(

I feel this way, too, sometimes, Karen; you are not alone. Powerful write; very well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :(

I love that line, "One who touches out of love, not duty". Many people can relate to that feeling of loneliness. Well done!

"And tears often fall,With no real rhyme or reason.
They land on my solitary pillow,And dry with no one to know."

These words spill forth from the page with such emotion and depth.
a truly wonderful pen from the heart and soul

Blessings
Allen

Good writing. You're normal... and lonely. Hell, there are a lot of us, and somehow, perhaps, maybe, we'll find a solution that's not as high priced as gasoline! Hang in there, and keep your pillows fluffed, since you never know. - Bill

A sad write, but not selfish or for pity for this is what we all long for. Nice job.