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Extinction
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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Extinction

 

It seems we will be losing some things,

That in life, I have grown to love.

And then, a couple of others,

That humanity is well to be rid of.

 

For we can well live without,

Another out break of the mumps or measles.

And although they are sturdy and stout,

Those old out-houses, look better on a postcard.

 

But how I will mourn the plight of the wild horse,

And lament with humanity if the honeybee is not here.

The good old swimming hole, cooling in summer, of course,

Is doomed as well, because some fool chose to sue.

 

The family farm, what a loss, as I see it,

With enough to make a living and feed the towns as well.

The milkman too, delivering at dawn, as was fit,

Both icons to be lost as big business marches on.

 

On a personal level, drive-in theaters will be missed,

Not so much by protective dads and moms,

But by the youth who’ll never at intermission be kissed.

And relegated to history told a wink and a grin.

 

But sad as I am to see all these going,

And determined to fight so that some are not so,

A hand-written letter penned with great knowing,

And love, or anger, pain or just news,

 

That is the one thing that saddens me most,

The human and personal touch given,

As one person takes time to think, write and post,

A heartfelt treasure, to hold close and remember.

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
thought provoking read

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on August 15, 2008
A lovely write edged with melancholy of the past. I never quite thought about all the things that are extinct as mentioned in your poem. I guess, like life, things come and things go. Nothing remains forever. Great write.

Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2008
So well said... beautiful, poignant & true!

Reviewed by Debra Kraft
Reviewed on July 31, 2008
so much is lost as time marches on. Yet much is gained as well. I lament the loss of the old milkman. I remember him, thick cigar always sitting in the corner of his mouth, wide grin always present on his face and in his eyes. Now we buy milk from a grocery store without the grocer; might even scan it ourselves, and pay a machine rather than a person. I hate cigars, yet sometimes miss the scent. And milk left in the chute would curdle by the time anyone was home to retrieve it. Yes, time marches on. And some things are gained, such as the internet and places like the den, where we can connect with people from all over the world, people we would never have been able to meet in years past. And even then, a cherished, thoughtfully penned letter can add to the connection.

A good, thought-provoking write. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewed by Natasha Bowman
Reviewed on July 30, 2008
I loved this line:
"And although they are sturdy and stout,
Those old out-houses look better on a postcard."
Amazing. :)

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
I share the heartfelt stirrings you have so beautifully expressed.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on July 28, 2008
True...sad...and beautifully written, Karen.

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on July 27, 2008
Sadly, the personal touch is going the way of the dinosaur. Your pen this with a wistfulness that touches my heart.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on July 22, 2008
...most beautiful writing of the heart Karen...and again one of your best...the personal touch...letters...words lost. Remembrances here...something I hold close....
excellent poetic heart...
John

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on July 22, 2008
GIANT HUGS to you friend I feel the same

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Excellent, this stroll down memory lane. I really enjoyed this. But I wouldn't despair that these homely pleasures are gone forever. Despite my currently posted article celebrating a new optimism (Optimism Rides A Strange Vehicle), I think the jury is still out on whether the things you list might come back in style.
Love and {{{{{hugs}}}},
Leland

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
I enjoy reading you wonderful poetry
Thanks for sharing
this excellent write

William

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on July 19, 2008
A beautiful write my friend...I miss many of those things that you've penned...my grandmother's little country store, the drive in...who could ever forget the drive in? I loved it! I grew up with it, and went on my first car date to the drive in. I recall mammaw's milk man coming every Monday and Thursday morning to fill her cooler in the store. My other grandmother had bees, they would scare me...but the honey sure was good. I grew up with the toilet outback also...I don't miss that! But, I think knowing that these things are coming to a close is one of the reasons that I strive so hard on our farm to hold on to a little part of the past....you've got me all misty eyed reading your wonderful write and recalling many of the days gone by....well done dear friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 19, 2008
Great write Karen.. We have lost so many special things in our world. Sadly times are getting worse, I fear for the future of mankind!....M

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
Oh yes the times they have changed, and though many say for the better, I often wonder. They won't receive that love letter that will cause them to shed tears for awaiting the return of their love, or picnic by the swimming hole while necking on the blanket or gather round the campfire on the public beach. Those were the days. Thank you for sharing Karen.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on July 18, 2008
can relate to this fine verse Karen, life mostly takes, but one thing that remains is memories of times loved and things loved, I remember the old swimming hole fromn years back also, hugs

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
You are absolutely right and I wonder how sad it is are children and grandchildren will miss so many things we took for granted...even a simple thing like a beach party round a bonfire... is now outlawed here. Sad sad sad.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
So true Karen,,, Your words give much to ponder,,Well Done!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
But how I will mourn the plight of the wild horse,
And lament with humanity if the honeybee is not here.

The wild horse - once considered one of our great American treasures. Now our government plans to kill thousands of them - they are no longer welcome on 'cattle grazing' land.

As for the vanishing honey bee, who pollinates 90 percent of our food - once it is gone, we may not be far behind.


Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 17, 2008
Loss of what's dear and meaningful is always troubling and extinction is especially cruel. Well said!
John

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 17, 2008
Karen how totally excellent this is! You have put your finger on so many of the things that I too,and I dare say, many feel the loss of !We are having to grin and bear the changes that seem to be coming so quickly all at once. Thanks for sharing! Beautifully written!...ET

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 17, 2008
This is bloody excellent Karen! The emotion in this brought tears to me eyes. Out of all you speak of here, losing the honey bee scares me the most. This, according to the experts, is a sign of something very seriously wrong with this planet.
Kudos!
Richard

Reviewed on July 17, 2008
I concur, Karen, one of your best - sad, that our children and their kids will never know the pleasures of what we enjoyed as young ones - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 17, 2008
Yes, these things you mention are a dying breed, some things this generation and the next will never see...pencils are slowly going out of fashion, some companies have quit producing them altogether, and there is nothing better than a hand-written letter...a personalization of our times at the cost of such high postage stamps...be well, you...may the wild horses live forever!

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 17, 2008
Emails have replaced the personal letter these days.


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