He Screwed Up (poem) by Karen C Vanderlaan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 29, 2009

Powerful, sad and so touching.

Reviewed on March 28, 2009

Many pay for the mistakes of loved ones, especially the children. I pray that father and son can work through their differences and become close again......M

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 28, 2009

A message that offers hope to all who have had loved ones who made a mistake...there is hope.

Fee

Reviewed by Pamela garner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

touching write. I hope they make amends & find peace together

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

Sad and very enlightening... would like to know the ending...

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

Beautifully writing powerful and a very sad story
I hope and pray that things will work out for both of them
Sending you Peace Love and Light�.Yolie

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

Powerful write, Karen; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

A sad story so well-written in verse, really crafty and laden with a great message. Fantastic write! I love it.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

Powerfully penned, Karen - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Marilyn Rice

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

Karen,
From a literary point or view....that was very well written... left me hanging.. wanting to know more.. wanting to know how this story ends. From a practical point of view... I pray that things will work out for the both of them. Thank you for caring... and thank you for using your beautiful way with words to share what is imporant to you with the rest of us. Keep up the good work... it makes a difference in the lives of others... the work... and the writing.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

Many of those that had paid with a long sentence are ostracized when they at last are out by the same society that told them of return to the fold once they have mended their ways.

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

I hope they both can now find the right path.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

Its easy to say some can make amends, but it is not an easy road he has undertaken...he will need prayer, luck & self-perseverance...hope he finds all of them...Ed