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One One-thousand, Two One-thousand
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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One One-thousand, Two One-thousand

 

See the sky turn from day to night,

The horses rear, buck and spin,

Anticipation hangs heavy in the air,

As the wind whips the storm into action.

 

Lightning strikes, one, one-thousand, two, one-thousand,

Keep counting until you hear the thunder crack.

At five the storm is one mile away, just think,

How close it is if you can’t even get to two!

 

The horses now quiet, turn their backs to the rain,

Their heads are down, resigned to wait it out.

The downpour is so fresh and clean,

Water runs in tiny rivers, off the roof, the trees, my hair.

 

Over so quickly and gone too soon,

The storm is now heading east to the mountains.

A rainbow hangs in the sky over the pasture,

And the horses have returned to their grazing.


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 Reviews of "One One-thousand, Two One-thousand"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 5, 2009
A most marvelous moment captured, and word painted beautifully!...ET

Reviewed on May 5, 2009
Beautiful write, well done, Karen!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on May 5, 2009
I just learned something from your "storm" poem--the formula for counting the distance of lightning from you. Nice poem, too.

Reviewed on May 5, 2009
Beautifully imaged storm, and the calm, after - well done, Karen.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 5, 2009
Such imagery in this...glad the horses found their rainbow!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 5, 2009
Powerful imagery, Karen; glad to hear the storm is over. Spring storms truly do bring many things.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 5, 2009
I have entered in the middle of the Pacific ocean, from a perfect day of calm seas like a mirror into the unreal world of a downpour with a wide corridor between two bouts of rain and the second one showing rainbow arch that we passed under.
Once you experience that, rain will be forever enchanted.
Thanks for sharing and for inspiring!

Georg



Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 5, 2009
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Loved the horses. You narrate storms so vividly and how animals react to weather, this is a true observation, and this poem tell it wonderfully.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on May 4, 2009
Peaceful, easy write, Karen...excellent imagery.


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