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Work
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i have not been on AD as much in the last couple of weeks-this explains why!!

 

 Work

 

Physical, sweat producing, muscle aching, work,

Dawn to dusk, old fashioned, heart pounding, work.

Satisfaction at the end of the day, work,

Falling asleep when head hits the pillow, tired.

 

The horses are safe, barbed wire is gone,

A hundred new posts now in the ground,

New fencing is stapled and tight.

And the hundred-year-old fencing is away to the dump.

 

Every muscle in my body is aching,

Band aids adorn several fingers,

And a purple thumb shows,

A missed hit of the hammer.

 

As I sit on the steps looking over the pasture,

My satisfaction in the job I have finished,

Eases the aches and puts a smile on my face.


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 Reviews of "Work"
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 1, 2009
Loved to work in my "hay" days
but now I am retired
My main occupation now is
keeping my Aches & pains in check
Peace & love Be with you

William

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2009
THIS hits home, my friend, and I firmly believe more people would benefit by putting in such a day/week/month of physical labor / Hi, Karen, my friend, I had to come all the way over here to say hi . . .

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 23, 2009
... now for the candles round the bathtub, oozing with aromatic oils, herbs and your favourite "chill-out" vibe, Karen. I am pathetic when it comes to physical labour. I wish I WERE strong in order to enjoy the immense satisfaction which must come from such a worthwhile job well done. Writing can wait... the needs of your livestock and land cannot! :)) xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 23, 2009
achievements are always worth their pain and toil ... could easily visualize your effort in this poem ...

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 23, 2009
Barbed wire, it shouldn't be around the prairies, God didn't gave conditional freedom, man did.
Tired from work, sweat, aching muscles and a smile of satisfaction on the lips...well done.

Georg


Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Hi Karen
Sounds like a job well done. Now take time to smell the roses. Cheers! Liz

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Good. That's the feeling when all is done. What the Creator felt when surveying His creation. No sleep like the sleep after a full day's physical labor. Way to go, Karen. Love this!

Lin

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
My goodness karen, you should have a smile and much more,dear girl,to have done such work,is something to make you glow with
pride! Still I hope the aches and pains,don't last too long;-)Kudo's!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
You should be feeling so proud!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
whew...thats an accomplishment!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Satisfying indeed...can almost see you wiping the dust of your hands...great imagery Karen!

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
I know Zackly how you feel. Had some new wood flooring installed recently and I got to do the carpet removal (the whole house), and the tackboard, and the crack repair, and the furniture relocation. Dead on my feet for 48 hours, bones aching. But ya know, it was a good kind of ache. There is satisfaction in hard work as you well know. I hope you at least had a power auger. Those old post hole diggers will grow hair on your chest if you survive. Patrick

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
It is so satisfying to see the fruits of our labour florish into something that will last a long time. Be it a fence, a house or a work of poetry...if we do it we value it.

hugs
fee

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Congrats on a job well done. A hundred new posts eh? What is that about 800 feet? Maybe a 1000? My wife told me once that if we could get a dollar for every scar on my hands and arms we could retire. (-:
Blessings ...

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Wow now that's more than a days work in anybodies book.

Reviewed on June 22, 2009
I've missed you, Karen; welcome back! Well done; now you've earned a little rest! Take it and enjoy! :)

(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~

As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Welcome home, Karen, you're missed. Know you're working hard, and understand. I don't have that luxery! LOL Well done. But doesn't it feel good, knowing you did a job well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
being an I.S. person, and lord knows we don't work...I forget often the satisfaction of hard work, well done. you remind me beautifully.

Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Indeed! It does sound like you got a lot accomplished. But I have to disagree on one point ... the purple thumb sounds more like a hit than a miss. ;-)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Keep Smilin; sounds like a job well done! And I think we could all benefit from doing far more of that good old fashioned type of work.


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