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A Wild Rose
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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A Wild Rose

 

He a skittish colt,

Rode hard and put away wet,

Far too many times,

Existing on scraps of kindness,

Too seldom thrown his way.

 

She a gangly filly,

Full of life and trust and faith,

That life and folks are intrinsically good,

Full also, of the naiveté,

Which accompanies a protected life.

 

Together they made an unlikely union,

So much in love, or perhaps it was lust.

 

When the winds and rains of life,

Blew hard against the two of them,

It was his inclination to brace against it,

With gritted teeth and shivering flesh.

Her instinct, however, was to close in for warmth.

 

And when nasty thorns rose up,

And showed their ugly selves,

She knew how to pluck out the flowers,

Without ever getting stung.

 

And he knew how to push ahead,

He got things done but missed the flowers.

 

She took his big strong hand in hers,

But let him lead the way,

Through bitter pain he mucked along,

And with each storm some hurt fell away,

And the sludge became solid ground,

And into the sunlight wearing the hint of a smile,,

In his hand a wild rose.


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 Reviews of "A Wild Rose"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on November 9, 2009
I love the metaphors in this... This is one of my favorites of yours.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 5, 2009
And into the sunlight wearing the hint of a smile,,
In his hand a wild rose.

Such lovely and meaningful sentiments, Karen. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 3, 2009
An interesting story with a good moral

Reviewed by Nicole Weaver
Reviewed on October 31, 2009
Karen,
It is so nice to have time to read your work. Very well penned.
Nicole

Reviewed on October 29, 2009
Wow! I love it. Well done, Karen.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 25, 2009
Much revealed in these blood~lines uncovered ()you are indeed a touching flower-Ted

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on October 24, 2009
I really you use of metaphor in this poem, Karen. And I love the happy ending. True love indeed. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on October 24, 2009
Compelling ! The different aspects of life are reflected in many ways! A great poem Karen.

Reviewed on October 23, 2009
This is so beautiful it brought my tears.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on October 23, 2009
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT VERY MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on October 21, 2009
really beautiful poetry, how it should be

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 21, 2009
oh Karen a magnificent poem,I'm writing through teary eyes of joy! Thank you for this experience!

Reviewed on October 21, 2009
Fantastic write Karen. And very, very clever and enjoyable. From experience I have to disagree with Jerry's statement below. There's a great deal of difference between lust and love. It's when the two come together that the magic happens and you've captured that magic in this poem.
Write On dear friend,
Marcia

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 21, 2009
Life's story for many.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2009
The unlikely pair that couldn't / But did / Age old story, and that part about love or lust? I am beginning to believe there isn't a whole lot of difference between the two. For to lust means a coming together for a wonderful experience / To love seems to bring about more heartache than happiness in far too many cases . . . Good writing Karen . . .

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 21, 2009
"And the sludge became solid ground" ... sure makes life easier to walk...great poem Karen

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 21, 2009
Oh! a rose that's a rose that's a rose...maybe she should wait for a real hummingbird.

Georg


Reviewed on October 21, 2009
out did yourself here my dear, great collection of verse, hugs

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 20, 2009
Karen, this is truly lovely.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 20, 2009
Karen this poem so touches my heart. What a lovely beautiful love sonnet. I feel this so much.
Peace, love and light to you my dear friend,
Amber "V"


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