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Heaven
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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Heaven

 

The fact that it was forbidden,

Didn’t sway the course of the affair,

Perhaps, in fact, it added to the flames.

And spurred on the desires of it’s lovers.

 

Passion was the fury that fueled the fire,

Reason was left to fend for itself.

Forgotten were alliances and promises made,

All forsaken in the depth of desire.

 

Two souls were awakened; two hearts beat as one,

He drew her to him with his strength and his charm,

She gave herself to him, willingly and completely.

 

Mostly their time was spent apart,

In lives spent but not truly lived,

Yearning and pining for one another,

Planning and waiting for the next clandestine meeting,

Longing for the kisses, and the touching, skin on skin.

 

They were never faced with the common realities;

The mundane truths of every day life and living,

But inevitable truths came to a head,

When she discovered she would bear his child.

 

So reality became a slap in the face,

Their secret impossible to hide.

She told not a soul, to protect her love,

And she named her daughter, Heaven.

 


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 Reviews of "Heaven"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 14, 2010
From the depths of passions flame , comes a new life into this world....Great write!...M

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on February 11, 2010
Wonderful poetry, enjoyed very much tody.

Reviewed on January 31, 2010
very good versing Karen, a heavenly piece of work, cheers

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 30, 2010
One of your best dear Karen.
Multi-leveled.
Hugs
r

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 30, 2010
Enjoyed tour Profound thoughts Karen
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on January 30, 2010
The twist in the final two stanzas comes like a punch in the face.
A deep message here.












Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 29, 2010
Quite a captivating piece, Karen.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
Karen,this is so full of the depth of passionate feelings that most of us experience at one time or another!(if we're fortunate)
YOne of your best,so beautifully written!I agree with Lin!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
Sequel, please. This story poem expresses the heights and depths of human frailty. Fine work, Karen...Lin

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
Karen this is touches the emotions in every way!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
the pleasure and the pain....I love that she was named "Heaven"

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
Absolutely one of my favorites Karen, a perfect story from beginning to end, leaving nothing to question.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
Wow....This is one of your very best, Karen it is a mini series romance and real life story packed into six perfect verses. It has it all, a romantic opening, ups and downs and then a dramatic climax that leaves the reader wanting to know more...
Captivating indeed.
fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
Like reading the pages of a secret diary...for your eyes only.

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
Karen, you have told this so beautifully...you are able to convey a feeling to your readers without all the flowery words and sappy sentiments...this is one of the things that I like so much about your work.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
Beautifully written poem.It puts a smile on my face.take care

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
What a fantastic piece of poetry, Karen. You put the desires of these two front and center with no qualms, with no despair. Even when the situation took an unexpected change of course you managed to find Heaven on earth. Truly, truly an exceptional piece.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 27, 2010
The fruit of ones love is indeed heaven.

George C.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on January 27, 2010
I just love this poem, you are such a wonderful story teller. What a love story! Heaven is one special child!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"


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