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I Have Common Sense
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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a bit of bragging as well as the beatiful ways of children


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“I Have Common Sense”

 

Her teacher laid out her work,

Pretty pictures and handwritten notes,

Reading scores and mathematical calculations,

Then information about an upcoming science project.

 

Her scores were high, all in the upper percentiles,

Such that they skewed the other’s test taken.

Then the teacher spoke words, which caught my grandchild’s fancy;

“She also is lucky because she has common sense.”

 

She then turned to me with her beautiful teacher smile and said,

“Are you scared?”

I was immediately taken aback but then thought,

“Perhaps it is a bit overwhelming.

 

We rose to leave; Elyssa received her token sucker,

On our way out I said, “So what do you think?”

She skipped away, a happy little girl saying,

“I have common sense!”

 


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 Reviews of "I Have Common Sense"
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on February 20, 2010
So true! Intelligence without common-sense is like a shiny boat without a rudder. Handed down in the DNA. May she use both well through the years. Lovely write, Karen...

Lin

Reviewed by Gerald Tate
Reviewed on February 19, 2010
Very important write, and one of your best Karen.

Well done, Gerry

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on February 15, 2010
our most precious, precious gift beautiful

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 15, 2010
Yes, it's true. Sometimes our children can be MORE blessed by being valued and credited for "real" gifts than for getting high scores jumping through what they often, in their worldly wisdom, deem as unfair and unnecessary academic "hoops" which the educationalists see fit to prepare for them. I'm sure many teachers and a lot of tiny students would agree! :)) Puts a lightness in my step! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 14, 2010
Nothing common about this Sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 14, 2010
the trick in life is retaining that common sense when children grow up into adults ...

lovely, lovely poem ...

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 14, 2010
Praise and rewards go along ways in developing self worth...Good poem...M

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 11, 2010
Indeed a seed planted in fertile ground that will do nothing but good for her. A very moving real-life story Karen. Blessings ... richard

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on February 7, 2010
And that is REALLY important! Enjoyed this alot :)

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on February 7, 2010
What Sage said!

Nothing common about this. Or the talent and intelligence and experience that went into it.

Hope the child is your spittin' image!!

L o v e,

Phyllis

Reviewed on February 7, 2010
very good verse speaking Karen, common sense and smarts together will take a person a long way. I know some very smart but with no common sense, haboring quite a bit of negative pretense, cheers my dear poetess, by the way your common sense is right on spot...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 7, 2010
Excellent write Karen
She is just a blessed Prodigy
Love & peace be with you both

William

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on February 5, 2010
This makes the best sense of ANY poem you've ever written, Karen Vanderlaan! What a wonderful thing said here, and through the eyes of a child, not just any child, but your precious granddaughter! This one goes into my library for quiet hour!! This one ranks the highest of all of your high poetry, and I'm blessed to know you as a friend, Karen...always thinking of how lucky I am to have common sense to know how valuable you are to me...Blessed Be.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 5, 2010
As it has been said, "Out of the mouth of babes..." Thank you for sharing the wisdom, Karen. You have recalled and shared the moment very effectively via your verses. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on February 5, 2010
Your grandaughter is wise beyond her years Karen. Without common sense all the education in the world is useless. Nothing can compare with it. I love this poem.

Hugs,
Marcia

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on February 5, 2010
Without it, she would have a tough road to hoe. The innocense of a child, I believe is preserved by common sense.
The picture shows this too.

Warmth and Love to you and Elyssa, Carin'

Reviewed on February 5, 2010
Always out of the mouths of babes true wisdom oftimes emerges. I luvit Karen. Peace and blessings. Mikii

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 5, 2010
I always said we can learn from the young and old..adorable photo!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 5, 2010
Hahaha!! Very nice indeed. That common sense will serve her well in the years to come. I absolutely love the fact that you put the last line in a smaller font, Karen.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 5, 2010
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 5, 2010
Children, more often than not make more sense than the adults!

Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 5, 2010
A lovely story, indeed!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 4, 2010
Oh, Karen, this is so lovely and you are right to feel so proud...an adorable photo, too.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 4, 2010
So delightful,your grandchild must take after her grandmothr;-)
Common sense is something to brag about! We need more of it today!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 4, 2010
Out of the mouths of babes, I tell you. lovely poem/story. You have touched one more child..isn't it lovely?

Much peace, love and light, my friend,
Amber "V"


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