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Absolution
by Karen C Vanderlaan → (All Poetry by Karen C Vanderlaan)
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Absolution

 

Skipping through fields or over sidewalk squares,

“Step on a crack, break your mother’s back”, she sings,

Running then diving behind trees and knolls,

He pretends to be a mighty warrior or dragon slayer,

The two grow in joy, gaining wisdom through innocent play.

 

But wisdom soon is as leaves in the wind,

Blown about and lost with the season,

They now plow through life with nary a care,

No thought for anything but fun and self.

 

Now looking back on years gone past,

Their mistakes stick in their memories,

Like peanut butter on the roof of your mouth,

Refusing to leave them so they look to be absolved,

 

They want to gain back the innocence once enjoyed,

Which they carelessly threw aside,

And they wish for absolution of those ills,

Committed against their fellow man.

 

Sadly, though, they soon realize,

That absolution can’t just be given,

By a man in a closet with a collar,

It comes with forgiveness and restitution,

And though it all cannot be set right,

It becomes easier to sleep at night.


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 16, 2010
Sadly, though, they soon realize,
That absolution can’t just be given,
By a man in a closet with a collar,
It comes with forgiveness and restitution,
And though it all cannot be set right,
It becomes easier to sleep at night.

These are wise sentiments, Karen. Coincidentally, I also have a poem posted here at AD some time ago entitled, "Absolution." Thank you for sharing your meaningfult insights. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed on February 23, 2010
you're absolutely good at this style of story telling with a meaning verse Karen, the mental stuff in my head I can deal with when it comes to sleeping, I either have a wonderful dream or nightmare, either way it doesn't bother my sleep, I'm use to dealing with my negative and positives in my head, saying all of that to say this, body pain is the hardest thing in the world for me when it comes to getting some good sleep and rest. Last night my hip joint ached up something terrible, even through the pain pill I took. I'd trade off a good mental nightmare anytime for the pain I was suffering. Anyway finally I get a little relief, I think digging out of all the snow we had did me in. take my dear

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on February 23, 2010
Much thought went into this profound write. Many wish they could change what they've done in the past , but it can't be changed. One must seek forgivness and go forward with the positives of life...M

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
...truly riveting Karen, powerful indeed, great work!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
Forgiveness can't be bestowed unless it is really received and felt on the inside. We are perhaps the slowest to forgive ourselves and therein remain guilt-ridden. But there is, I believe, a supernatural peace that is freely administered to a truly repentant heart and it is beyond all fathoming. It's a wonderful thing to be able to sleep easy at night, that's for sure! Regret and remorse are a rock and hard place. Thought-provoking narrative, Karen, thank you. xx

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
Good simile in the third stanza karen.
I totally related to it. Yes ... forgiveness
is the key. Real forgiveness will free the soul and mind
from all fetters. enjoyed this,
peace ...
r

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
Absolution...only comes through the door of sincerity and repentance, never from wishing it or from promises...

Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
absolution can’t just be given,
By a man in a closet with a collar,
It comes with forgiveness and restitution

Much wisdom here.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
Ouch!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
Wise writing, Karen.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 22, 2010
Sincere confession to a priest absolves you of your sins but you will have to stay in purgartory for the remission of those sins.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on February 21, 2010
And sleep comes late
To those who wait
Because forgiveness
Requires a witness
Patrick

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on February 21, 2010
Karen, deeply moving and very illuminating poetry. Nicely written.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"


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