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Midst Granite Statues
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Twisting up the crooked course...

Twisting up the crooked course
to the spot I said my last farewell.
It's been five years today.
A glare reflects from your marker,
steers me through a mass of lonely stones,
Lumbering midst granite statues of Angles,
Crosses and Praying Hands; and
dead blooms make me want to forget.

Brought a favorite poem by Herrick,
to the Virgins, to Make Much of Time,
to read and prepared sandwiches
of peanut butter and jelly for lunch.
I've waited and longed for a cure but
the months get longer with each year,
and I need freedom from this weight.

Gave your Army jacket and spit-shined boots,
to your friend, Pete, to wear
in the Independence Day Parade tomorrow.
By the way, I told him to keep them,
today, I decided life is short and
my feet are for taking bigger steps
in lieu of standing idle.



 

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 Reviews of "Midst Granite Statues"
Reviewed by Andrew Shipley
Reviewed on October 24, 2007
A moving, touching piece. Beautifully done.

Reviewed by Silent Dream
Reviewed on September 8, 2007
An emotive piece with much strength. Wonderfully shared! Thank you.

((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on January 31, 2007
Great write!

Chrissy

Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Very well written, a moving piece. Thanks.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Enjoyed

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
A sad write, but a good one! Holly

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Seems you had a day replete with many deep feelings dear Barbara. There is certainly an austere beauty in graveyards that plumbs profound depths of emotional introspection. A fine write!

Blessings ....
Richard Lloyd Cderberg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Powerfully sad, but powerfully good, too, Barbara.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Death is final, but life is not static. It is good that you should not stand idle. Great poem, Barbara. Shows much sensitivity. Victor

Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
Death reveals itself slowly. It's hands touch more and more of us as time passes. For those left behind, it places the art of living squarely in perspective - something you have captured in the tone of this moving piece, ty.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
wow, this is wonderful, so well expressed and sad, but up lifting too. sometimes we have to look forward

Reviewed on January 28, 2007
Sad...but really well-expressed piece!!!

Sandie Angel :(

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
really poingient-well written and sad but lovely

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
I see the resolve to live life again, while remembering our loved ones. Beautiful poem.

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
So felt this one and the memories you brought forth...... Silence yet fondness in those stones. Wonderful work here Barbra, NOPE Beautiful.

Blessings,
Joselyn


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