Twisting up the crooked course
to the spot I said my last farewell.
It's been five years today.
A glare reflects from your marker,
steers me through a mass of lonely stones,
Lumbering midst granite statues of Angles,
Crosses and Praying Hands; and
dead blooms make me want to forget.
Brought a favorite poem by Herrick,
to the Virgins, to Make Much of Time,
to read and prepared sandwiches
of peanut butter and jelly for lunch.
I've waited and longed for a cure but
the months get longer with each year,
and I need freedom from this weight.
Gave your Army jacket and spit-shined boots,
to your friend, Pete, to wear
in the Independence Day Parade tomorrow.
By the way, I told him to keep them,
today, I decided life is short and
my feet are for taking bigger steps
in lieu of standing idle.
Seems you had a day replete with many deep feelings dear Barbara. There is certainly an austere beauty in graveyards that plumbs profound depths of emotional introspection. A fine write!
Powerfully sad, but powerfully good, too, Barbara.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
Death is final, but life is not static. It is good that you should not stand idle. Great poem, Barbara. Shows much sensitivity. Victor
Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2007
Death reveals itself slowly. It's hands touch more and more of us as time passes. For those left behind, it places the art of living squarely in perspective - something you have captured in the tone of this moving piece, ty.
((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream
Chrissy
Blessings ....
Richard Lloyd Cderberg
Sandie Angel :(
Blessings,
Joselyn