Faces Don't Exemplify (poem) by Barbara Kasey Smith on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 5, 2007

Barbara,

This is a haunting write, full of tears and compassion for the lost children...God help us all.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

you have composed a most compassionate poem, where the faces of lost children only partially reveal the true sadness within their lives ...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

Great pen...Hugssss

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on May 2, 2007

This makes me weep. I see these children around everyday. if the world does not give attention to your calls then we must be prepared to have millions of terrorists in this world because such children grow to hate and take any offer to harm others. Well done Barbara

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 1, 2007

So emotional a write indeed. There are so many children who are left to fend for themselves at such a young age. They learn lessons beyond their tender years. Good write.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on May 1, 2007

A very heartfelt and touching write-the plight of the precious, orphaned children of the world is absolutely heartbreaking and gut-wrenching

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2007

Yes, God bless those precious children without a home. Emotional write and well penned.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 1, 2007

Such a touching write my friend...I agree God bless the children without a home, and those whom have an abusive home! I don't understand how anyone can be mean or cruel to a child! Your poem is full of compassion from the heart, and a genuine concern! Enjoyed this much, a touching and powerful write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 1, 2007

Amen my friend God Bless the
Children without a home
Sometimes when I see this children with their
Bagging and sleeping in the streets
My heart cries inside!!
I love this part because is very true
( Faces don't exemplify our real identity )
This is a very heartfelt message
Love And Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on May 1, 2007

YES, God bless them all

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 1, 2007

God bless the children without a home

And you have written, a very heartfelt poem.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on May 1, 2007

Barbara, you've written a lovely poem and the sentence you wrote is so true that "Faces don't exemplify our real identity". I worked briefly as a foster parent once, and it is a sad thing when children lose their parents, their home, and all the things familiar to them that puts stability in their lives. Excellent write.