The Ocean (poem) by Barbara Kasey Smith on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 18, 2008

I love the ocean and I like your sentences about it!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on May 10, 2007

A wonderful offering my friend, for the ocean holds many secrets and a mystery at anytime! Enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 9, 2007

the ocean is a beautiful and mysterious place and you've manage to capture it quite eloquently ...

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on May 9, 2007

Wow I could almost see the ocean and
The waves and felt the ocean breeze
On my face and the Sea gulls
Such stunning Imagery and the flow is beautiful
I could picture a man feeding the sea gulls!!
Outstanding Write!
Love And Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star or Yolie

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on May 8, 2007

A super write ! You have captured the essence of the ocean and its creatures!.......M

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on May 8, 2007

Hi Barbara, Yes, the ocean....another of God's wonders to behold. Just returned from a two-week vacation in the Caribbean! Beautiful! :)

God Bless
Much love,
Lena

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 8, 2007

The Ocean - truly one of earth's many magnificent marvels - and you capture some of its essence wonderfully, Barbara.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Such a nice, pleasant write. I could see the ocean, hear the waves crashing ashore and taste the salt in the air. Enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Beautiful oceanic imagery Barbara! My favorite
place to be, you did it justice!

Love,
eileen

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Wonderful pen...Hugssssss

Reviewed by Richard Orey

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

I love the ocean. I've spent many hours fascinated with crashing wave action and cavorting dolphins. You captured the essence so well, Barbara. I especially liked the reference to dolphins bouncing up and down "like children on a seesaw," taking turns showing off.

A really nice poem with lots of distinct imagery. Well done!

Richard

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Good descriptive poem Barbara. Great write.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

Still love to visit the beach and be transported over the horizons. Nicely done with great visuals.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on May 7, 2007

The ocean is an intriguing place, and you've captured some of its mysteries in your poem, "The Ocean". Several great visual images such as: "swells beat against the shoreline,
leaves white foam smiles on the sand".