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A Victory Sign
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When your small, you can be tricked in a second...but, eventually you catch on.

Sherman and I approach the forks,
he yanks a coin out of his pocket, flips it,
turns it over on top of his hand...
heads you win, tails you lose...
I stand wide-eyed, open-mouthed,
for three years I've never won,
it's settled, again...

I'll deliver the Daily News
the farther trip over the mountain.
I'm sick of his winnings.
Crack of dawn is running late,
slowed by an overcast wintry day.
I see his crooked grin
as he lifts two fingers for a V,
a victory sign as we separate.

I'm so mad I could spit,
again, I must make the trip over the bluff,
walking against the wind is harsh.
I take a couple steps; fake a fall...
grab my stomach; get in a fetal position,
falsify a look of despair...

brother comes running,
I whisper, "Can't make the trip today,
stomach hurts, got to go home."
He stands stiff as an icicle,
like the coldness of the day,
pulls the coin from his pocket,
pitches it as far as he can.

I uncross my fingers and moan...   

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 Reviews of "A Victory Sign"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 21, 2007
This was great!

Reviewed by Spirit Warrior
Reviewed on June 20, 2007
Oh Barbara,
You had me rollin on the floor there...great write!

God Bless-God Speed,

~Spirit Warrior

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
Enjoyed this trip down memory lane, the imagery is great...I too had a brother and I was the younges, so I got many tricks played on me over the years...but looking back I too played some pretty good tricks on him along with the help of my sister, it was girls against boy! We gave him a hard road to travel at times...but when we needed him most, when bullies picked on us at school, he had our back, when we wanted to learn to ride a bike, he taught us...when we needed a male input on dating, he was there...my brother was the man of our house...two sisters and a mom, yeah we gave him fits at times! But the memories are cherished as is yours. Enjoyed every line of this clever and well written poem my dear friend.
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on June 19, 2007
A cute poem. My brothers used to flip coins with me, too.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 18, 2007
Fascinating! Women are often too danged smart for us mere mortal men - and they are fast learners, too - so this old dog keeps tryin to learn new tricks!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
I really lioked this write.. You are quite clever!....M

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
So ingenious! Love the thought process as you go along in this piece, enjoyed.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
Barbara your so smart I love it.
I probably done the same!
Your imagery is so beautiful and
So vivid I could see the coin only it was heads!
Love Peace and happiness to you
Barbara my friends call me Yolie!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
Love this write Barbara
Heads I win, tales You lose
Brilliant.

Love & peace
William

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
Barbara, you made the point with images that stand out like pop up figures! Excellent descriptive poem!

ET

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
Excellent, descriptive and visual like a movie. A unique write for you ... I love it dear Barbara. Your talent is always refreshing to me. Blessings ...
Richard

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
smart move...

a sweet poem of overcoming...

enjoyed...Art Sun...

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on June 17, 2007
Oh my is everything possible - {beautiful} Ted


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