His blue eyes search my mind,
trying to unfetter my heart...
yearning a glimpse of my emotions.
I recoil from his stares...
fumble the buttons on my blouse,
shake a leg in a nervous twitch.
He tries to study my awareness,
sits down offering a wide smile...
I look up into mysterious eyes,
a chill runs right through my body...
offers a newspaper to read.
I straighten my skirt...moisten my lips,
stand up with an outstretched hand...
introduce myself and thank him.
His hand is warm and his grip strong,
chills run right through my body.
Our hands release,
sweatiness hangs on my hand...
like a part of him is left behind.
I want to extend my hand...
reverse the missing remnants.
A stunning write my friend, you've penned a compelling write with just enough said to keep the reader filled with curiosity! Enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Beautifully expressed Barbara..I have to agree with
Kate...this is brilliant such a mysterious encounter
You know he must have read your body language
And you must have read his because this encounter
Left a lasting impression on your mind
For you to have written expressed
such beautiful emotions on this write!!
Outstanding Flow and poem!!
Love Peace and Joy many hugsss to you always..Yolie
BRILLIANT, Barbara. This is stunningly visual and arousing of all our emotional energies as well as we are easily led to participate in this encounter. So vivid and cinematic. And I'm sure we can all relate! :)) I am actually so shy that I even apologise to and fumble with the pillars in a supermarket if I chance to bump into them! :)) I am total water with flesh and blood... Andy will tell you! :)) Love, Kate xx
Intimate encounters, energy touching energy, eyes seeing eyes, Barbara, if you had no connection with this man, you would never have reacted, let alone write a poem about this. So know, that you met a soul that was familiar to your soul, and you acknowledged it...It wasn't time for these two souls to converge, so now, let it be a very fond memory, and when the time is right, either in this lifetime or another, your souls will meet again and perhaps that will be the time of fireworks and love and all that comes with a connection of the soul level.
I enjoyed your poem, as usual, and I look forward to more.
Beautifully expressed Barbara! I agree with Victor,excellent!
Eileen
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2007
You developed a great character. Not everyone finds a meeting with a captivating person easy. Some would want to back out. Great show of feelings. Victor
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Blessings,
Joyce B.
Kate...this is brilliant such a mysterious encounter
You know he must have read your body language
And you must have read his because this encounter
Left a lasting impression on your mind
For you to have written expressed
such beautiful emotions on this write!!
Outstanding Flow and poem!!
Love Peace and Joy many hugsss to you always..Yolie
I enjoyed your poem, as usual, and I look forward to more.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Eileen
Enjoyed reading.
Patti
Enjoyed reading this wonderful piece
Love & Peace
William