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The Monster Is On My Tail
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The Monster is On My Tail...

CHILDREN'S POETRY


I pull my red wagon up a steep incline,
take my hands off and jump inside.
Half of me in...the other half out,
bump and race down the hill in doubt.

The red beast is out of control,
causes me to jiggle, toss, and roll.
Wound up like a rubber tire,
arms scratched and head in briars.

Round and round my body does surge,
the monster flies past me around a curve.
My body is not far behind,
feeling like it's going to unwind.

I'm going too fast to come to a stop,
a tire rolls fast and weighs a lot.
I'm catching up with the red beast,
his wheels are screeching to the beat.

I fly around him like I'm a sled,
if I don't stop this body...I'm dead.
I sort of like this rolling scene,
all I see is the ground and things.

The monster is right on my tail,
he's nudging my body as I sail.
His handle gets hung in my hair,
ouch...whee...I'm no fairing well.

We both make a real nice pair,
as we fly and roll through the air.
Jigging and tagging down the hill,
gee...this is fun...what a thrill!

No time for pains and scratches to hurt,
it's fun as we bump and jerk.
We don't see what lies a head,
Watch out beast...ouch...this I dread.

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 Reviews of "The Monster Is On My Tail"
Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on August 14, 2007
The life of a child, free from cares, worries, and danger...it was great having those great adventures...enjoyed this much my friend!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on August 7, 2007
Ah yes, to be a child again without the fear of broken bones! Loved it!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 7, 2007
Wonderful writing,enjoyed...Hugsssss

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
Now that is what I call a fast paced exciting poem for kids of any age(including me;-) Love this one and how well you describe the details! Lots of memories camt to call! Thanks Barbara, for this bit of magic!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
What a great drive. Ah the things children do. Can leave them on their own can you. Bet you ended up with some scratches. But I'm sure you're fine. Great poem. Victor

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
I too was that daring in my faraway yesterdays
When I was a tot
we used to make out own crude wagons
because we could'nt afford those beautiful "red wagons",
we used discarted baby carrage's
wheels and axles and Fruit crates
and what ever nails we find along the way
to an accident waiting to happen
Peace be with you

Love
William

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 6, 2007
I sort of like this rolling scene,
all I see is the ground and things.

Wonderfully penned, Barbara, and you've again managed to bring back some memories for me of both my little red wagon, and my delightful little wooden snow sled.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 5, 2007
wonderful and so clever-

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2007
Barbara this is an exciting story!
Great for kids! Perfectly penned!

Patricia

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on August 5, 2007
This is really cute in that it reminded me of my
Radio Flyer that took on the big oak tree at the bottom
of the hill...enjoyed.

Allen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 5, 2007
The strong beats and rhythms are great to keep the pace and sustained imagery/metaphor going, Barbara. This write is fascinating for adults and children alike and leaves as many questions as it answers. Fantasy and realism all mixed together, this gripping tale(tail!) is one that reaches out and grabs the reader, taking him/her along for the ride. Slightly spooky, too. You are good at this! :)) TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 5, 2007
Barbara this is wonderful and it is certainlt true of many children, for they have no fear. Thank you for sharing. I loved it.

Rose

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 5, 2007
Why I can relate to that when I was a kid. Good write.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on August 5, 2007
Your blessed with the ability to recall & write of all stages in life- love <*>Ted


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