This is in tribute to my dear brother who passed away in 2001.
I'm still angered,
you were called away too soon...
no time to say our goodbyes.
Our closeness, cemented by blood.
I recall nurturing you,
a tiny boy and not well.
I cuddled you like you were mine,
I'd fight over you in a tic of an eye.
I felt sadness in my heart about your illness.
Your sickness brought a lifeless preschooler...
blue eyes like a brilliant gem,
held tight to mine as I rocked you.
I, your caretaker,
you, my energy, my bliss, my everything.
Not wanting to leave your side,
sensing your dependence on me.
I, a Mother Hen,
watching after your every need,
determined no one would mock or touch...
the frailty of your thin limbs.
In time, you bloomed like a grand rosebush,
full of blossoms, branches strong and firm,
you fought your own battles,
handsome and standing out in every crowd.
Time didn't treat you well:
no pleasure rapped at your door,
depressions brought pain,
alcohol smothered your torments.
I sensed the anguish.
You seeked to find contentment and happiness.
You, thrashed about, losing interest in life,
my soul ached for you...feeling helpless.
As you slept,
an angel took your hand,
lead you to a Heavenly place of gratification,
finding you a place to fit in...
live life without torturous demons.
At the time, I didn't think I could stand it,
I let go of my sad soul,
allowing you to rest,
take a break until our grand reunion.
Barbara I believe we all look forward to that grand reunion with our loved ones without trying to wish our life away, a beautiful poem you share with us today, thank you so much.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
I am looking forward to this grand re-union - not only with our loved ones in Christ, but with the author and finisher of our faith and hope for a blessed future. Your pen is like a waterfall here dear Barbara.
Blessings ...
Richard
The strength and power of this love is awe-inspiring and moving to the uttermost, Barbara. Your depth of feeling wells up within your solid form and words and I can feel the heavens arch and ache with you. Here you exemplify what it says in Song of Songs, about love being "as strong as death and as unyielding as the grave" Many waters cannot put out the raging fire of love. It shall never be quenched. But you have wisely sought to harness and rein in the power of its fulfillment until the time of next meeting. And yet, even a taste of the edge of it here is moving. How wonderful to be loved in such a way, be it by husband, mother, sister, child or friend. You must have blossomed him, albeit his season was short. My deepest sympathies and admiration. With love, Kate xx
"And God shall wipe away all tears from their eyes; and there shall be no more death, neither sorrow, nor crying, neither shall there be any more pain: for the former things are passed away". Uplifting truth
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Dear Barbara, you've done well to share such a heartfelt write with us. It's hard, I know. God Bless you, Holly
outstanding writing this poem is filled
With deep emotions and beautiful thoughts
Even when we lose a loved one,their not gone Barbara
Your love and beautiful memories of
Him still breathing and living in your heart!
Love Peace and hugssss to you my friend.....Morning Star
Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Barbara, what a heart-warming poem and tribute to your brother.
My heart has been touched by these kind words.
We may lose our loved ones temporary but we know we shall spend eternity with them in Heaven.
Barbara this poem is outstanding! With tears I applaud the depth to which you expressed your love, grief, and what we all face at times the torment of loss and feeling of helplessness. I'm glad you were able to be a help to him for the time you did. Thanks for sharing!
Dearest Barbara - It's so clear what a beautiful soul you are - All know it-Here we find another example to remember -As you have -{All goodness & love}* Ted
This poem is soul touching...profoundly beautiful Barbara~AWESOME!!
The loving nature of your words give the reader precious moments and precious imageries between a brother and a big sis who love and nurtures them. Such tender loving hearts you all shared~thank you!
Blessings,
~Gwendolyn
Dear Barbara, what a heart-warming poem and tribute to your brother. The way you characterized his growing is beautiful. After losing a brother myself, I can certainly emphathize with every word you've written. Your brother was so very lucky to have such a loving sister as you. Blessings.
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Newfie Hugs, Rose
Blessings ...
Richard
allowing you to rest,
Sometimes, that's all we can do, but your love for your brother shines here, Barbara.
Be safe,
Karen
Hugs, Laura
With deep emotions and beautiful thoughts
Even when we lose a loved one,their not gone Barbara
Your love and beautiful memories of
Him still breathing and living in your heart!
Love Peace and hugssss to you my friend.....Morning Star
My heart has been touched by these kind words.
We may lose our loved ones temporary but we know we shall spend eternity with them in Heaven.
Love, Hugs and Smiles
Pat
Love,
ET
"A Grand Reunion Is Coming"
This poem is soul touching...profoundly beautiful Barbara~AWESOME!!
The loving nature of your words give the reader precious moments and precious imageries between a brother and a big sis who love and nurtures them. Such tender loving hearts you all shared~thank you!
Blessings,
~Gwendolyn