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The Old Country Church
by Barbara Kasey Smith → (All Poetry by Barbara Kasey Smith)
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I couldn't believe the stunning sight...

There on the hill stood an old country church,
pine trees hovered around it like soldiers on alert.
The window panes glistened, mirroring the sky,
three crosses stood on a hillside close by.

Dark clouds tried to obstruct the striking view,
buttercups and daisies emitting a nice hue.
A ray of sunshine peeked through the clouds,
landing on the crosses standing there and proud.

I couldn't believe the stunning sight,
the crosses lit up like a dazzling light.
I rubbed my eyes, watching in disbelief,
my heart and soul found it hard to believe.

I walked up the spiraling hill toward the church,
I found an ailing lamb trying to give birth.
In distress and unable to pull herself up,
looking at me...like I'm having bad luck.

I came to her aid as I patted her wooly head,
if I didn't do something, they both would be dead.
I looked to the crosses lit up like a dazzling light,
must make a decision and it better be right.

I gave the baby lamb a gentle tug,
Mother lamb jumped up like giving it a hug.
Standing there to make sure eyerything is okay,
the baby lamb bucked like it wanted to play.

I looked back to the hill were the crosses stood,
feeling in my heart, I had done some good.
Thinking about Jesus being called the Lamb,
I fell to my knees and gave thanks to the Great I Am.

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 Reviews of "The Old Country Church"
Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
A hearttouching poem. It took me there ! The images were very good and I could see the crosses , church and lamb.......M

Reviewed by Ron Spangler
Reviewed on November 10, 2007
Very inspirational poem, makes one think about the miracles God performs everyday. Maybe it was his guiding hand that led the writer to the Church on this particular Day.

Enjoyed, Ron

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
The beauty of God's timing always amazes me. Possible death was replaced with life through the kindness of a stranger.

Awesome! Kathy

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 6, 2007
a most lovely poetic tale Barbara
thank you for sharing
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on November 5, 2007
Absolutely beautiful spiritual thoughts
And very vivid imagery I could almost
See the church and you given that baby lamb a gentle tug
I feel your inspirational feelings throughout this
Powerfully written poem!!
Wishing you love peace and many hugssss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 5, 2007
Barbara I thank God for everything everyday of my life and I find myself apoligizing to Him for I feel that I turn to him so often.
Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 5, 2007
I find myself doing that a lot more lately. In fact I seem to be thanking God dozens of times a day now for so much. I really feel His Holy Spirit more than I ever have, guiding, sharing, keeping the path lit. Something is happening, something beautiful, like this write.
Blessings sister ...
Richard

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Oh YES! This is the way of Grace and the pride we keep in our hearts and for always being ready to give when the message is clear.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
I can feel your inspirational heart beating...
This is so beautiful!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Most inspiring poem for a Sunday evening to reflect upon and give thanks.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
This is really a beautiful inspiring piece. Wonderfully done.

Allen

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Absolutely beautiful write Barbara. Enjoyed this one very much. God bless you.
Paul

Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Thought provoking, beautiful pen, Barbara; well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Branch Isole (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
we are all called to serve. as your work describes, we may never know how or when.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Well meant souls always find the good way(beautiful)love Ted

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
So very beautiful, just like you sweet lady...HUgssss

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Barbara what a Beautiful story,, I could feel your emotions each step of the way,,,God Bless
Christine

Reviewed on November 4, 2007
aww this is such a sweet poem all about faith , very nice write.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Barbara, the "Old Country Church" is truly beatiful. The setting of the church, the crosses, and then the relativity of the lambs to the Lamb of God is nothing less than masterful. Great write.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Oh my what a touching and inspiring write my friend, this is very humble, and heartfelt...I felt as though I was with you through the entire visit to the little country church! Enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce B.


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