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Mother Can You Hear Me?
by Barbara Kasey Smith → (All Poetry by Barbara Kasey Smith)
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Mother, oh Mother, why did the seasons steal you away from me?

Mother, the gleam in your eyes are gone,
they stare like you live in a space in time.
Are you dreaming of chasing butterflies,
wiping runny noses, lecturing children,
cuddling a sick child, washing clothes,
dancing with Dad?

Mother, I'm here now...can you see me?
I'm grown and wise because of your tender care...
look at me Mother...I need you to listen,
to touch my face, to wipe my eyes, to shelter my shoulders.
I miss you Mother...your smile, your kindheartedness...I miss you.

Why did the seasons steal you away from me?
You were my underpinning, the one who really loved me,
a listener, a shoulder to cry on, a giggle...giving me security.
Why, oh why, did seasons snatch you up into its gusts,
carrying you into a world of fantasies and fallacies?

I try to find you amongst the shadowy clouds,
traveling too fast for me to get hold of...vanishing in my hands.
Those memories of former times keep me searching,
desiring to capture a snapshot of those sparkling green eyes,
laughing in a hoarseness, dimple like smiles, your smell,
your touch...Mother, Mother, I'm here...can you see me?

The seasons...(cruel), I cannot forgive them,
they gauger every single moment of your life,
laugh as you become slow-moving, steal your beauty,
take away your dreams, memories...
sealing them in a chest, only you can hold.

Mother, oh Mother, why did the seasons steal you away from me,
leaving me without your love, joy, security, companionship?
Mother, Mother, I'm here...can you see me?    

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 Reviews of "Mother Can You Hear Me?"
Reviewed by Andrew Shipley
Reviewed on January 15, 2008
"Why did the seasons steal you away from me?" What a powerful, moving, heartfelt question. A beautiful poem.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 14, 2008
A very touching poem ! I lost my mother on Dec 17, 2002. The hoildays are harder for all of us with out her shining presence. Thankyou for sharing !.........M

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 30, 2007
A most touching write, Barbara. I believe that your mother can see you. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 30, 2007
THank You Barbara
For this beautifully written Heart felt piece
Peace & love be with you
Wishing you A Happy New Year

William

Reviewed by Tavia McDowell (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
This poem was very heartfelt.
I'm sure your words comforted someone who felt the same when they've lost their mother.
God bless.

Tavia.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
This poem was really good. Thank you for commenting on my poem. I'm sorry about your mother. Dani

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on December 23, 2007
Barbara,

This one is heartfelt and warm!!! You have displayed great love for your mother and your mother for you. You are lucky to have one another.

May God continue to bless you and your family!

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your family!!!

Lots of love,

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on December 21, 2007
B e a u t i f u l. You were -- and are -- very lucky to have such a mother. She was even luckier to have y o u !! Merry Christmas!!!
'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on December 21, 2007
Oh Barbara this filled my heart and soul as I ask each night in my prayers Mother Oh Mother can you...
Thank you for sharing dear.
Merry Christmas to you and your family and we wish you the best in health and happiness in 2008.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on December 21, 2007
Barbara this is a heartfelt write
Page is filled with intense feelings
And sadness of loss of a Mother
You expressed and writing this feelings very well
Truly an oustending piece!
Wishing you..Barbara an abundance of blessings of
Peace Love and Joy....Merry Christmas....Morning Star

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
the sense of loss is so well expressed here in your writing-peace to you

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Heartwrenching write here Barbara. Well said my friend.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
My goodness Barbara ... this is you at your finest. A bittersweet poignancy drips from the spirit of your words like honey from an overflowing hive. Superbly conceptualized and executed. Brava!
Light and Love ...
Richard

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Faith in foreverness is filled with grace-love & beauty~Evol*Ted

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Dear Barbara, You touched my soul. The love of mother is always with us. Great poem. God Bless all the mothers. Emile

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 20, 2007
Yes of course she can hear you,, feel you ,,, Barbara you really hit the pit of my heart,,, as My Mom is my heart, I feel every bit of emotion,,,Prayers and Love
Christine



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