Come walk with me
through the webs of my life
can you truthfully tell me
everything between us is alright?
Come walk with me
from beginning to end
do you feel smarting and resentment
we both need to mend?
Come walk with me
hear unsaid words...sorrows forgotten
a desire to purify our wrongs
growing bitter and long begotten.
Come walk with me
listen to my heartache pine
do the utterances you spoke
ever cross the threshold of your mind?
Come walk with me
sanction our souls to feel rest
with choices you made long ago
putting my spirit through many tests.
Come walk with me
before it's too late for me to sit in ease
the words "I'm Sorry" would bring a peace
release this umbrage "still" causing me to grieve.
This is really Beautiful soothing healing Barbara! This is what I feel!
Thank you for sharing your heart!
I enjoyed all the depth in these verses!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo
STay Positive! and STay STrong!
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2008
'Come Walk With Me' pretty much sums up what we all need to do on a daily basis. Blessings Love Holly
Oh yes, Barbara!!! Quite beautiful and like a breath of fresh air through an newly opened window on a stifled and long-dark room. How we deny ourselves this purification of mind, heart and soul because we simply will not either make the offer to walk with those whom we have hurt or who have hurt us. We go through life lame on account of our stiff-neckedness. Such humility and gentleness in your spirit. Such perception and self-honesty. And such a desire for peace and harmony. You are a born peace-maker and mediator. Love this, thank you. Kate xx
Beautifully expressed thoughts
Barbara I felt sadness through this verse
Barbara resentment is a powerful word!!
Love this poetic view of thoughts!!
Peace Love and Light...and Hugessss too...Morning Star
I feel hurt and pain within your words Karen but the best way to deal with it is to talk about it, then you have the opportunity to start a new and it is never too late dear, all will be fine. Thank you for sharing.
This is a sad ourpouring of pain that is the result of joining lives with another. You've captured the feeling that comes with the ups and downs of relationships. Lovely write.
'the webs of my life' ... indeed an apt image dear and talented Barbara. Umbrage - a delightful word not often used too. Great choice! Love the soft and introspective feel of this. Blessings ...
Richard
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Thank you for sharing your heart!
I enjoyed all the depth in these verses!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Shexooo
STay Positive! and STay STrong!
your way through this. I think you can. Gene.
Barbara I felt sadness through this verse
Barbara resentment is a powerful word!!
Love this poetic view of thoughts!!
Peace Love and Light...and Hugessss too...Morning Star
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Harold Matthew Nash
Richard
Be always safe,
Karen