Somewhere out there in the ages of time you'll find...
Somewhere out there in the ages of time you'll find:
two hearts beating in harmony, smiling at the moon
breaths of lovers becoming one as they journeyed
the dreams accomplished during their life time
passions stronger than the winds of a fierce storm
a never ending love and commitment to each other.
Somewhere out there in the ages of time you'll find:
trials and tribulations struggled over and over again
seeds sown and babies blossoming into adulthood
family rules being obeyed as examples
nurturing and compassionate love taught with pride
tears playing in the clouds to hide moments of sadness.
Somewhere out there in the ages of time you'll find:
happiness, sadness, achievements, depressions,
hardships, laughter, heartaches, and other incidents
they intermingle not knowing who they belong to
searching for a match and to feel peace and accord
roaming and desiring to attach themselves to owners.
Somewhere out there in the ages of time you'll find:
two peoples lives combined with energies and faults
this thing called time is ticking, ticking, down minutes
knowing regardless of what hovers in the universe
time cannot be halted and each day is a day spent
be glad you left your forces soaring in space forever.
this so presses my buttons and touches my chords, Barbara. I can say "yes yes" to every line and identify with each idea you have presented. You speak of that which is finite in terms of that which is eternal and point to the fact that both co-exist in one continuum. A beautifully structured and deeply thoughtful piece which is masterful in the way it connects. TY Kate xx
Another beautiful poem your words
captured the essence of two souls that journey
Through the many roads of life!
Brilliant write excellent message within!!
Peace love and Light...Morning star
It is interesting that our lives are more similar than different. Except for loved ones, most are doomed the the anonymity of the flow of humanity from birth to death.
Karen said "Somewhere out there" is a beautiful person with a very passionate, loving heart and soul, I believe that would be you Barbara. Thank you for sharing.
Wonderfully beautiful I enjoyed the way you presented from opening to conclusion. As "Somewhere Out There" happiness and love lies in wait for us all as we reach desparately to hold onto every fibre of it that we can, not to mention to treasure.
Another brilliant poem that captures the essence of two souls through all the many facets of life as the clock ticks them on their way into infinity! Beautifuly done Barbara!
I like the format you've used for this poem. Another thing I like is how you give emotions life in the third verse, as they search for owners. That idea is unique and perfectly poetic! You tell the truth about time in a lovely way. Nicely pennned! Love and Hugs.
Sheila
Hi Barbara, a retrospective write and very inspirational. The only time we have is the present and we must make days bright for one another even when the sun is not shinning. Words are alive and move hearts, uplift spirits, and we can soar the the uttermost parts of the galaxy by the mere use of words. Thank you, peace!!!
Oh my ... this delightful and insightful poetic prose takes one on a souls journey through the eyes of the writer. Planting the proper seeds in this life, in good ground, will always produce something of worth later on. Be assured that you have been quite prolific in this mandate.
Blessings and Love ...
Richard
Barbara, this poem makes me think of timelessness, and you've written a timeline of the average person's life. No matter who we are, where we are, or what we do, as you said, "time is ticking".
captured the essence of two souls that journey
Through the many roads of life!
Brilliant write excellent message within!!
Peace love and Light...Morning star
Ron
An outstanding piece
Love & peace
William
Harold M. Nash
great write Barbara.
Love, ann
Newfie hugs, Rose
Christine
Wonderfully beautiful I enjoyed the way you presented from opening to conclusion. As "Somewhere Out There" happiness and love lies in wait for us all as we reach desparately to hold onto every fibre of it that we can, not to mention to treasure.
Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn
Blessings,
Joyce B.
ET
Be always safe,
Karen
Sheila
Blessings and Love ...
Richard
Sandie Angel :o)