I see in my future a whole lot of hope.
And a world full of people who've learned to cope.
I see a place where thoughts are free,
where people will listen and I don't talk to me.
Where people are happy and freedom is used and all the children are no longer abused.
A place where it's beauty you see all the time. A place where criminals are set free of crimes. A place where rainbows shine all day, where everything bad is all thrown away.
A Place where streams reflect the sun, a place where freedom can say it's won.
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Reviews of "A Place"
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2006
Sounds a bit like the old folks home, down road across the field..
Think it's called rainbows end..
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2006
Reminds me of Dr. King...and his dream.
Beautiful...
Reviewed by Frederick Barnes III (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2006
Alaysha Kianna. This piece of writing was refreshing! Don't we all wish this place existed? Nice rhymes and great rhythm!
That's about all I have to say. Can't expect much advice from a kid ;)
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Think it's called rainbows end..
Beautiful...
That's about all I have to say. Can't expect much advice from a kid ;)
A true and awesome write.
Karen
This wonderful place sounds like El Dorado
Something to aim and plan for..
Peter