Be assured that my tears still fall When my soul is stirred. I am emotional, sensitive and drenched in you.
My laughter still comes When my imperfections are showcased by my limitations. Thanks for accepting my humanism with a smile.
I'll always be that oversensitive me, Gasping at the sight of others embracing, Especially when a child sees their mother . I love to celebrate the joy of others.
Uniquely lost in a void while looking into your eyes, Moment later, captured by the warmth left while making the bed. I continue to smile from the kiss goodbye, And the anticipation of seeing you at the end of the day.
Thanks for listening and inquiring About my rather strange take on life. I have always wanted to be your mystery to solve. I need you fully alive with me in this experience called life.
I have never wanted to be a discovered moment, But rather a never ending, unfolding gift of surprises. I am far from simple and somewhat complex, Assuredly, I am like a never ending, non-concluded book
I am fully captured by you and full of gratitude, Especially after all these years and life experiences. I still lick my lips.
"I have never wanted to be a discovered moment" is a such an interesting way to sum up your attitude. I like it.
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on May 20, 2008
This is beautiful and I wholly relate to your sensitive, perhaps empathic, nature. You have a unique form of expression that is very lovely.
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on December 28, 2006
I feel as though I have shared a wonderful reflection of your soul in this most captivating work. This is a truly beautiful tribute to your evident soulmate and I feel moved, touched and enriched by the experience of reading. Happy new year to you and yours. Love Panda :)
Charles D. O'Connor III "I am Providence" H.P. Lovecraft. "Check out The Horror Beyond Gable Way and news on my upcoming anthology Voices Of Midnight And Other Utterings". Take Care, friend.
oh this is delightful...a wonderful piece depicting a soul that so loves life and hungers for more...softly romantic and sensual...great imagery...all in all this is an exceptional piece of work.
This is a beautiful and most touching love poem, delicately sensual, and from the very soul. A rare pleasure it is to read a new way of saying "I love you". Excellent.
Love,
CJ
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Happy New Year.
Karen
When my imperfections are showcased by my limitations.
Thanks for accepting my humanism with a smile.
My friend...You have penned a gem here...such a realistic heart warming write....wonderful...love n luck...BHUWAN
Take Care,
Charles D. O'Connor III "I am Providence" H.P. Lovecraft. "Check out The Horror Beyond Gable Way and news on my upcoming anthology Voices Of Midnight And Other Utterings". Take Care, friend.
Love,
CJ
Brett
Great job.
Gods Speed!
Michael