Roll, Wrap, Rise and Wriggle” (poem) by Kimmy Van Kooten on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 11, 2007

"Roll, Wrap, Rise and Wriggle"
Enjoyed the twist here, very unique indeed.

Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

A poetic gem

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2007

Sounds blissful, excellent choice of words, this rolls right along in its uniqueness.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on January 27, 2007

A poetic bouquet in "“Roll, Wrap, Rise and Wriggle”".

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmaneul Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on January 26, 2007

I agree! This is very creative and clever. Plus you chose the perfect way to illustrate the piece. B r a v a !! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 26, 2007

Graced flow and expressions Kimmy...... Very creative.
Light & peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on January 26, 2007

pizza dough of a poem Kim, very interesting

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 26, 2007

wow...torrid and steamy...great write, Kimmy

Carole

Reviewed by Jerelyn Craden

Reviewed on January 26, 2007

Intriguing and brave, allowing yourself to play with words outside of the OUTSIDE of the box ... and, having us "get" it. Yes, it is steamy and sultry and also refreshing in its delivery.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

excellent flow to this superb erotica ...

Reviewed by Debra Harmes-Kurth (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

Liked the artwork and the poem kinda surprizes as it wraps you up after the roll. :)
debra

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

Thank you for sharing this lovely gift, Kimmy. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

Steamy write. R

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

Fantastic verses. enjoyed their gentle flow

Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

reads like a list of latin verbs!

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

Lovely, Kimmy, lovely. Too many hot vapors can spell trouble :) Victor

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

Sounds gymnastic. Well written.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

Kimmy..THIS is superb..it's a whole new approach to erotica..lol..YAY!!

Love it!

Vesna:)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

"A reserved lover, it is said, always makes a suspicious husband"

Fascinating!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

Kimmy,

A very creative piece. Very sensual also.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

Wild, and lovely!!!!! Fun read!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 25, 2007

Perhaps everybody nees that drops of love mixed with a wild moment of craziness now and then to survive.
Well done!!!
((((( ))))))from Georg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Well that's a new one on me;-) Keep em koming Kimmy!;-)

Reviewed by Jim Moore (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Ok, so what drug am I missing and how do I get some?

Best,

Jim

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

I like your style here..........
pax A

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Wow! what a write....
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Okies, seya somewhere better than the bikeshed, the woods?

Reviewed by Brett Moore

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

You continue to thrill me with your uniqueness and talent with words.

Brett

Reviewed by Tamara Perlin (Reader)

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Smokin...this poem is so HOT! Not a picture I needed to see, but I enjoyed the write. ;) Kisses, Mara

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

I read the title and thought it was about baking. I guess I wasn't too far wrong. lolol
Rusty

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

Sounds like pillow talk describing snuggling into warm, fluffy cotton wool, hamster like comfort. But I am probaly off target - yawn!! Maybe I should call it a night.

Regards
Dai

Reviewed by Lynn Barry

Reviewed on January 24, 2007

You sure got it goin' on poetic girlfriend!