Pen and Ink by Kimmy Van Kooten
'Shoo Fly Pie"
All rights Reserved
Copyright 2008
It's 4:25 am and I think I'll try and sleep now. . .Teenagers! need I say more?
Up all night, a mothers pacing from day to day. . . what’s she facing? Her thoughts, boomerang with worry and worry comes right back at her, in thought! If she’s not looking at the whole she’s weighing pros and cons If not, seeking out her soul she’s waving magic wands! She tosses, she turns yet, sleep won’t come! No little sheep she can’t count on one! Her gut feels tied her heads all busy Her hearts in her ears and her spirit’s all dizzy! Up all night, a mother’s pacing hour upon hour her thinking’s racing . . . around a track in her brain She wants to go insane! "Lock me up and let me sleep!", she screams "Take me away to the meadows and sheep!" She gleams! But, I hear them crying in the night When their faith turns into fright and fearing for their children Bewildered. Up all night, every, ticking, minute Seconds turn into eternities of darkness, so, she prays. . . She prays. . . Up all night, every waking moment She’s a mother. . . and its in her make-up the black mascara dripping down her face pace. pace. pace. . . Up all night, a mother’s pacing from day to day, hour upon hour, every ticking minute, every waking moment the forever seconds...she beckons. . . sleep. . . sleep. . . sleep. . . sheep. . . ?
"Lamb of God, you take away the sins of the world have mercy on us Lamb of God, you take away the sins of the world have mercy on us Lamb of God, you take away the sins of the world grant her peace. . . "
You forgot to have a line dealing with a mom's flat forehead from banging it against a brick wall (or is that just me that often feels like I would be better off doing that than trying to get through to some of my kids... hee, hee...)
Kimmy you wrote this with the experience of one who knows every word from living it each day. All mothers owe you thanks for this gem! You had me remembering the many nights I did the same,and also the ones my mom did before me! Imagine the miles we put in pacing...
ps did I misunderstand, you didn't mean that you did that pic with pen? If so you are a pro and I didn't know;-)Wow!
A home I would love to live in, nice photograph! Very descriptive in the day and life of being a parent, a mother specifically. Think I have paced the floors many a night...
I understand a Mother's angst, but most especially that which I imposed upon mine. I was blessed to always have my son home by his curfew - a true oddity. None the less, I always prayed for his safety and prayed again that he was home - safe and sound.
I remember those long sleepless night when you're worried sick...wondering if or when will they come home...it took tough love for one of mine to be turned around...beautiful prayer
...the first to review at the bottom of this page...hears your prayer...for he too...your father...loses sleep over ones mother... his wife...and ones daughter...also recognizes her mother's caring beauty...sometime mistaken for worry...but a constant gift a mother's gives to let her family sleep...in the safety of her awaken heart.
most beautiful prayer...
John
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
So very beautiful ,great work..stay safe and well sweet Kimmy...Hugs
Mothers pace and fret, sometimes scold. But a mothers love is boundless. We are only alowed one momma, I miss mine, it was ten years ago the tenth of this month. I still miss her laugh.
The sketch is fantastic Kimmy and as a Dad I too have waitied up more than my share of nights or got called to go pick up one or the other of my daughhters and now looking back I still woudn't trade being a Father for all the money in the world.
I think we relive our youth full days and think of what might befall our kids, as in the chances we took, but we lived through them, so rest in peace, for naught comes from worry and as you have so rightfully done, say a prayer to God for there safety and rest your weary head.
A live depicting of mothers' chores and mission ~ poemized with emotions of "A Mother’s Nightmare Turns to Prayer". A beautiful composition of inspiring light.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Liz Wilson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
This made me cry Mom. It made me cry because I'm sad for what you are going through, it made me cry because as a mother of a teenager, I worry exactly like this, and it made me cry to think that at one point you were going through the same thing because of me. I love you so much!!!
Wow! I read your poem and instantly thought of my mom and how she must have felt. All I know is whenever I can home she was always awake. I don't ever think she went to sleep until all her babies were in the house and safely tucked away. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Powerful write, Kimmy; well penned and illustrated! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on January 16, 2008
Wow, Kimmy. I happened upon your poem right after reading George's piece Tick, tick, tick, which ran along similar themes of angst, the passage of time, and the nature of human existence. A wonderful read full of great imagery and emotion. Thanks for sharing.
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You forgot to have a line dealing with a mom's flat forehead from banging it against a brick wall (or is that just me that often feels like I would be better off doing that than trying to get through to some of my kids... hee, hee...)
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Sleeeeeep sista....sleeeep!!
Love Tinka
ps did I misunderstand, you didn't mean that you did that pic with pen? If so you are a pro and I didn't know;-)Wow!
Love,
ET
Mothers are the core of every family...I hope all works out well for you and your family...
Be safe,
Karen
God bless you. Kathy
Carole~
most beautiful prayer...
John
Walt
hugs
Fee
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Georg
A live depicting of mothers' chores and mission ~ poemized with emotions of "A Mother’s Nightmare Turns to Prayer". A beautiful composition of inspiring light.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Wow! I read your poem and instantly thought of my mom and how she must have felt. All I know is whenever I can home she was always awake. I don't ever think she went to sleep until all her babies were in the house and safely tucked away. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Love you Dad