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Innocence
by Louisa A Dobbins → (All Poetry by Louisa A Dobbins)
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Obedience is better than sacrifice


 

If you let those boys touch you,  you will die  and will not go to heaven.

What in the world is Mama talking about?

Honor your Mother and Father.  I had better listen if I want long days on earth.

Poor Grant. He doesn't get it. Here he comes. He will touch me and I'll have to sling him down the corridor again today.

There is an advantage for him.  He gets ahead of us in the school lunch line.

You think I'm helping him to get into heaven too?

I hope he made it.  He gone now.  Died in a car accident, speeding to the head of a line of traffic.

 Louisa A Dobbins
   

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 Reviews of "Innocence"
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2006
Very Wise Lousia...........

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on December 6, 2006
This is sure a unique write, Louisa. It has me grinning, even though poor Grant is gone. I can just picture you slinging him down the hall.
You are one wise gal to listen to Mama.

Love,
Connie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 6, 2006
Life is delicate and very inter-laced.

Little gardens of personal imperfection have a tendency, if not weeded regularly, to turn into forests overrun with infestations.

This is a great write Dear Louisa.

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2006
A person shows his defect in everything he does. First in, first out. Victor

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2006
LOLOLOL, CLASSIC HUMOUR.... I'M STILL LAUGHING


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