the mounds of prescience
when it breaks my gut, I like to yell 'I am dying'
pissing inside the whirlpool of dejected clouds,
biting my tongue after every stupid breath,
I' ll save time for the factory, where I shall learn the secrets of sweets. can see the fire in the mirror,
raging like a sea under the hurricane, what if the crocodiles go wild and feast upon my shame? "I am only human" maybe I'd say. many of times, many of same shoes, stepping on the same bloody puddle, how more a human I can be?
a dust of fading orange in the sky, these feelings are like wolves always hungry and restless, they do lick the blood of all daylights. almighty! O! almighty
allow me the flute of my mind, as it rests like a film inside a camera, a click to percieve.
Copyright 2007 Roshan Tulachan
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Reviews of "Click"
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2007
Enjoyed very much,Hugsssss
Reviewed by xxxxxxx cccccc (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2007
enigmatically and elusively profound. the last line is a pure joy of insight. there is a cry of despair here, true and truthful emotion. you captured the time, the place, the feeling, the reader. poet.
You have a photoshop of brilliant imagery and atmosphere in this one. Beautiful to read and I really feel for this man. A flash of excellence from you babycake. I'll hopefully be clicking on more from ur poetry selection x
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 5, 2007
Maybe coz it's late, but this is waaaaay over my IQ, lol and mensa counted it as only 144...keep clicking, and enjoy life with wife and son...