rise, rise with a heratful of thirst
to celebrate the dewdrops before it slides down like a fragile pearl, breaking the mirrors of our wishes,
for the wind is wind, and
tomorrow is tomorrow.
rise, rise with a soulful of love
to spread humanity before it shatterss into pieces like wars, blinding the eyes from the Gods,
for the tears is tears, and
mother is mother.
rise, rise with a mindful of dreams
to paint the sky before it hides inside a fog like a winter morning, seperating us from our beauty,
for the cloud is cloud, and
sorrow is sorrow.
rise, rise with a breathful of faith
to bring us all together before we kill each other like barbaric animals, clawing our human dignity,
for the rain is rain, and
thunder is thunder.
Copyright 2007 Roshan Tulachan
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Reviews of "Rise"
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2007
I am completely smitten by your mastery of painting color and emotion on your canvass of paper with your brushes of words. Excellent portrayal of many feelings in this poem. The lyricism is vibrant in each stanza's opening lines and the feeling is powerful in the closings. Great energy abounds throughout the work and the imagery is practically visible through your descriptions of real and unreal elements that comprise this composition. Nicely done.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
Good rallying call for everyone to take stock, and see life in Gods reality, and the beauty of His creation...
Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on July 12, 2007
Creative poem with a powerful message. Thanks for sharing.
Susan