Optimism Persists (poem) by Karen Palumbo on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2010

For us living beings, God is more. The expressions of His will to revive and reside with us are told well in this writing. On the belief of God, no matter what religion we tend to, our persistent survival instincts, our replenishing procreation, our creativity, and many of our attributes are evidence to God's powerful creative existence; this is not to prove His existence, but for us, who refuse to believe, to realize where we come from. It is difficult for us to see that we came from someone, but we give birth to young; that means that someone gave birth to us (our beginning). The time comes, and I will be happy to be made better. Thank you, Karen, for sharing this with us. Enjoy creating, always.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 16, 2010

I live easily without the crutch of god... gods, because life is becoming better all the time for most in spite of the unfortunate few who fall victim to their predijices or nature.

Ron

Reviewed by Emile Tubiana

Reviewed on August 5, 2010

Dear Karen, you expressed today's situation with art and love. Unfortunately neither the anointed one nor his apostles seem to underatand the plight of the people, but soon things may change and the order will be reestablished. Love Emile

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on August 4, 2010

Karen, the indomitable spirit that is the core of America, this God loving nation will prevail. Our tests will be many. Today, more than ever the tide of opposition to the forces of tyranny that would foster our demise from within is mounting. We shall overcome as a nation and as a force of citizens with unprecedented unity. Freedom will once again reign in America, May peace and love be with you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 3, 2010

Life seems to be changing at such a pace,
grappling old and new, in God we trust.
Our representative republic is vanishing,
confiscated, overrun with big ideas and lust.

The whole world seems bent on heading into even more chaos, Karen. Your verses express much worthwhile meaning. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on July 31, 2010

This is a powerful poem, Karen. You have much wisdom and insight. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on July 31, 2010

good one Karen, everyday we have to overcome, adapt and improvise, cheers

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on July 25, 2010

It is scarey sometimes to try and visualize what is in store for us.

well done

hug
Kat

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 24, 2010

OPTIMISM...ANOTHER WORD FOR HOPE...MUST ALWAYS PERSIST, NO MATTER WHAT THE CONDITIONS OR MIND SETS. AS YOU SAY, WE MUST REACH OUT IN LOVE. A WONDERFUL INSPIRATIONAL MESSAGE. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on July 24, 2010

I try very hard to remain an optimist, and generally I have much to be thankful for. But my head is not buried in the sand either. Nicely done. Patrick

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

I have no idea how I missed this excellent poem..I so agreewith all that you written..We are on the verge of a new world, what that will become is yet to be revealed..

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on July 23, 2010

Extremely well crafted piece. Thank You for sharing.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 22, 2010

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

A keen write~
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

No beating around the bushes with you Karen
Tell it like you see it.
Great Poem

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

Our faith is all we have left, because our freedoms are going by the wayside ... God help U.S.! Powerfully penned, inspiring lines -- well done, Karen. LOVE that piccy. =]

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

Karen, Our faith is all we have when the world is crumbling all around. Material gains will never last! Spiritual achievement is the better way. No one can diminish when day is done. Excellent poem! ~Peace, Love, and happiness to you always!~ Chessly

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

Fantastic write Karen, and speaks of God's love so gracefully.

Mary

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

Most troubles could be healed by sharing love, after all who said love they neighbour, it would also alleviate much of the material drama associate with it. Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

I ditto Fee! Extraordinary write Karen~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

Spiritual achievement is the better way,
as no one can diminish when day is done.

If only many felt the same way.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

your poetry always offers us such wonderful truths Karen
and I especially love this line:

"Spiritual achievement is the better way,
as no one can diminish when day is done."

so often it is harder to seek this
as we each all want the materialistic
our nice homes & cars & job...
but too living with spiritual abundance & seeking
offers us the emotional wealth we all can attain...

May Love's Bounty Always Embrace You
Love Vickie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

Karen this one says soooo much. I know as a historian you have seen that the price for a new beginning does not come cheap. I have listened to the voices of my American cousins and wonder how long it will be before the people rise up again in anger, frustration and just hunger to say enough is enough. Billions are spent yearly on defence budgets, billions are spent on research, billions are spent on foreign aid but does this do any good for the hungry who can't feed their families, the sick who can't afford treatment or medicine, or the homeless who continue to multiply with no jobs to be had.
I don't claim to know the answers and I don't believe isolation from other countries is the answer as some claim (buy American only lobbyists), perhaps it is time for our governments to rethink the priorities of a nation that is so obviously hurting. Sorry for rambling but I look at the budgets for the military of both our countries and just shake my head wondering why the US government has more concern over military strength than the healthcare of its own citizens...
fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

So sadly true, Karen. You've explained it all very well. Nicely done.

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

Very well constructed poem, Karen

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 21, 2010

Slowly the people are seeing the masters of deception and lies and finding the TRUTH. Well done Karen.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 20, 2010

In God We Trust Is Liken Fable,i.e. I Wouldn't Trust (God) On Bet!

Until You Come By Near Death (I Have 3 Times)Or You Are Really Dead You Surly Truly Get Meet The Man (God) Never Will Is Word Said He Just Looks At You Dam Well Right On You Will (I Got) Message!

"Yep Outcome Is (God)s" - Why My Your Life Is Misery,i.e. You Can Run, You Can Look The Other Way, But Never Can Will You Hide From (You) Yourself Is (God)...

Kool Way You Wrote Poem Even Though I Know Otherwise From Near Death!

TRASK...

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2010

Duty is ours. The outcome is God's domain.