This Poem was written for all the people who lost a loved one in the September 11/01 tragedy in New York. However, I think this poem would help a lot of families perhaps find a little comfort during the war in Baghdad if they have a loved one currently stationed there.
It's funny how through time things change
sometimes taking our loved ones away
but still in life a gift is left
to help us ease the pain...
Memories of a loved one
and how we loved them so
memories that are our's forever
a gift we never have to let go...
Close your eyes and see them
the mind's eye is a wonderful thing...
The face, the eyes, and the smile,
and all the joy the memory can bring...
And at times you can feel their presence,
perhaps the gentleness of their touch...
And if you're really quiet
you might hear them softly whisper,
"I'll forever love you so very much..."
So please don't weep with sorrow
tomorrow is promised to no one
just hold on tight with all your might
to the gift that's been left behind...
The title of your poem caught my eye, and your photo made me want to reply. Your poem was touching and well done. I would have replied without the photo. God Bless.
So very beautiful and incredibly touching!
There is no number high enough to rate these words, refected from your heart!!
"Wonderful"!!
Hope you are well!! Miss hearing from you!
Come up for air once in a while! you'll get dusty in that book work!!
*Hugs*
~Jen
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2002
This is truly beautiful and wise words have been shared. I know when I go its the happy memories I hope those I leave behind remember. More then just a 10 star rating!
A very lyrical expression of a poignant theme which goes right to the heart of the issue.
I'm sure many of its readers suffered loss from the tragedy of November11 in the USA. A poem such as this would nestle in their hearts and minds to assuage grief.
I live on the west coast of Australia and therefore the tragedy, though it aroused outrage for the act and grief for the bereaved, did not touch me in a direct way.
However, last Saturday I lost a dear friend of long standing to the Grim Reaper and felt (still feel) deep grief at the loss. I'm currently working on a poem about that and, along the way I have encountered your poem and the solace it has brought me.
Top marks for a simple yet powerful example of the poet's art and thanks for posting it.
Very popular poem - well constructed and emotional.
Reviewed by Fayaz Buriro (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2001
Really U have won!
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2001
Victoria,
Thank you for a lovely sentiment. I have lost some friends in the attack.
It helps to know others are praying. If you like I just posted TRADE CENTER,
and if you read it you will know what I mean. Thanks--Gregg
Reviewed by lizbeth star (Reader)
Reviewed on September 26, 2001
A WONDERFU & MOVING POEM! TRULY WORDS IN ART FORM AT ITS FINEST!
Reviewed by Lila Mae Channing
Reviewed on September 26, 2001
This is an amazing poem! Heartfelt and most appreciated!
Valueable message of hope with a touch of humanity.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
This is so excellent a tribute.
It was so sad.
Peggy
There is no number high enough to rate these words, refected from your heart!!
"Wonderful"!!
Hope you are well!! Miss hearing from you!
Come up for air once in a while! you'll get dusty in that book work!!
*Hugs*
~Jen
I'm sure many of its readers suffered loss from the tragedy of November11 in the USA. A poem such as this would nestle in their hearts and minds to assuage grief.
I live on the west coast of Australia and therefore the tragedy, though it aroused outrage for the act and grief for the bereaved, did not touch me in a direct way.
However, last Saturday I lost a dear friend of long standing to the Grim Reaper and felt (still feel) deep grief at the loss. I'm currently working on a poem about that and, along the way I have encountered your poem and the solace it has brought me.
Top marks for a simple yet powerful example of the poet's art and thanks for posting it.
Thank you for posting it, Victoria.
Gina
Kristie Leigh Maguire
Romance Author
Thank you for a lovely sentiment. I have lost some friends in the attack.
It helps to know others are praying. If you like I just posted TRADE CENTER,
and if you read it you will know what I mean. Thanks--Gregg
This is more than a 10!!!!!!!!!!
Just for a moment......
Yours truly...
Gilles
It pulled at my heart strings
wonderful job...
Thanks,
Trixie
Robert
a "10"