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Wanted JACK HAMMER

by D. Enise — Read all 64 poems by D. Enise

Hurt once again,
Another brick in the wall.
So quick to go up,
And so slowly, it falls...

Beams of steel,
Solid they hold,
Mortar and Brick,
Layer, upon layers.


Demolition,
goes ever so slowly,
As I tear one down
anothers constructed!


The part of myself
That I had liked most
My willing to trust
despite all the risks

As time goes on.
I have been finding,
I am not so quick,
In the department of "Trusting".


The essence of living.
Is in dreams and in hope
In trusting and loving
In the giving of self.


The part I liked best
My sense of wonder
And the child like heart,
I had been blessed with.

I do not know,
how to feel hate.
I have not been vengeful.
And can forgive a mistake


So then I wonder,
What's so buried inside,
That has me forever,
Building these walls.


As I continue my searching,
A new trade, I'll discover,
I am determined to learn,
And use a jack hammer!

Copyright ~2002
D.Enise

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

In life, as we seek growing,
Sometimes it can seem,
we have gone "backwards".

Many times, I seem to need a "sledge hammer" kind of effect, in order to "see" some thing's..
So, in my lack of having learned to have much Patience" as of yet..
I decided, hmmmmmm why not try a Jack Hammer! *S*

And I pray I have the strength to tear down the walls, and that my heart,
Never grows Cold~

Friday, June 21, 2002


Poem Artwork
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Music~
"The Rose"


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Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 23, 2002
6-23-02

You Had Strength In Beginning as in the End
my Friend why you not all will Overcome!

Thanks!

TRASK

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on June 22, 2002
wonderful! i turned my speakers on just for the song. Oh bette were has your passion gone. or maybe its my passion for which i greive. great write, thanks for the memories
josie

Reviewed on June 22, 2002
MARVELLOUS WRITE!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 22, 2002
don't forget to replace the rusty pipes...

Reviewed by Naun Kao (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2002
That was awesome!!!, I loved the way the music and illistration went with the poem. Beautiful beat. Keep chipping away. I think I see a pin hole that just might crumble the enire wall.

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
WOW!!!!! Jen,
This piece is so absorbing!!! I read it a few times, I was lost in it!!!! I feel this struggle daily, and I thank you so much for putting it into words!!!!! Absolutely Beautiful!!!!!

Hugs,
Maria
xoxoxoxo

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
Hey Jen,
yes I truly relate to this "personal struggle"..LOL..Time heals, just remmember and you are a searcher and searchers find..

Blessings and love, Jo

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
An awesome write. I could see how hard it would be to trust your love with someone. We live in a back stabbing world, but there is someone out there you can trust. Love the art!

Reviewed by Gone Gone (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
oooooooooooooo the rose, that's one of my favorite songs =) A great poem as well, and I like the photo too. It's all great. *singing*

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
Great poem, Jen. The search for truth is what matters most.

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
Oh Jen,
I am feeling a bit
sentimental today...
This choked me up inside.
Break down that wall...
Let your heart always
stay young...:)

Hugs,
Trixie

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
powerful write on introspection...We learn something new every day...if we want to...;-)

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
Wow...A wonderful write..heartfelt and emotional. Loved this! Tear down the walls hon....learn to live again!

Reviewed by Cathy J. Montgomery
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
Meant to say, too, the picture is beautiful and the music sets the perfect mood...

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
Pierces straight to the heart! Wonderful writing, as usual...

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
I ditto jay. Excellent write hun!

Reviewed by D. Enise
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
I have no clue how this got posted twice??

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
Each stanza is wonderful. I especially like the 4th... I can relate.


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