Trapped Within A Hell (poem) by Trixie Love on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on January 18, 2004

How well I know what you've expressed here,
Trixie. Losing a loved one is a terrible
pain to experience. God's blessing on you
and yours.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 8, 2004

Bittersweet Trixie!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

outstanding work Trixie, this is one of your best, a real tugger of emotions.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

Don't be lonely too long..
Fabulous write Trixie...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

Sad but beautifully written.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

Tinka Roaring Fires Poem Above- You All Are Truly Trapped in This Physical Holy Hell World!

TRASK

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

Sad, dark, and very good, Trixie.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

A very moving creative expression, Trixie. Thank you for sharing this poem. Love and peace, Regis.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

Trixie that ending got to me....it went from candlelight and music and drifting thoughts to trapped within a Hell......fantastic writing...really got me in the end..powerful....I tried three times to reply to this...am I the only one getting dumped off?...take care trixie...floria

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

This is really sweet

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

((((((((((((((TRIXIE)))))))))))))))))

so sad, this write; don't give up hope! you'll find someone i am sure; i'll keep you in my prayers, okay??

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

Nice, sad song!
"The pain of loneliness
clawed at my heart."
I like this powerful phrase, Trixie.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

Wow! A fantastic write Trixie, albeit sad and dark, which seems to be catching in the den today;-)...
(Thanks for your concern!)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

(((trixie)))

(((HUGS))) powerful, sad write--keep searching, you'll find it :)

love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

One must see the light in everything. Nice heartfelt and moving poem

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

"The pain of loneliness
clawed at my heart.
I began to spiral into the
pits of darkness,
"Trapped Within A Hell"
That seems to never end... " < <

How often we get into these endless corridors..

Debs

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 7, 2004

Trixie, beautiful poem. Just keep them candles burning.