I wrote this poem in the 1980's, and presented it the first time in a university setting. It was greeted with hostility by the majority although at least two students liked it. I was even accused of hating people. I will be interested to see how it is greeted here.
Copyright, 2007, Jerry W. Engler
It's the hows we know so well,
the hows that put us in control.
It's the whys that we have only nodding acquaintence with,
the whys that make us lose our order.
We know how the atom works with
protons, neutrons, electrons reduced
to quarks and other parts.
We know how grass grows and birds fly,
and many other things,
how to make an engine go,
and how to make a toothache stop.
That's how you and I can sit
in sophisticated pose:
because we know how.
We know a little of the hows of earth,
to cover it with altruisms and greeds,
our mowed lawns, cars and concrete.
We masters of the hows are on a pinnacle
that continues to grow, each person
ever more part of the mass of the hows,
left less to be his own.
It's the whys that bother us,
that cause us
to cling to our mass of hows,
to avoid plunging
into the depths of the whys.
We carry only
the smallest piece of the whys
to justify all our hows.
So, we'll spend our time talking
about how we'll set
the order of the world,
how we'll run ourselves,
not why the atom,
why the grass,
why the birds,
why us.
If anyone ever trys to tell us whys,
let's nail him to a cross,
and spend 2,000 years
explaining how he was.
I can see how this might be controversial, but I like it. This is a deep poem, wow! Social commentary at its best. You cut to the core. For non-Christians, so what? This poem won't hurt them.
Jerry, I cannot see the same things with regards this poem as those that "said you hated people"; maybe I don't have the intelligence to figure out poems like this, but I can read and think and I know the "why's & wherefore's" of at least my world...don't listen to anyone else but yourself, he is the one person that you need to listen too...Ed & Rufuz (w00f)
interesting and enjoyable
strong write on what we really don't want to see or know
it's real and people don't like reality
most people
glad you put it out there!!!
I see this piece as bringing out, or at least trying to bring out all the how's and why's that exist. There is nothing wrong in questioning anything as far as I am concerned. Yes I could rationalize and understand where so many would become angry, but anger does not solve mysteries, only the how's and why's. Great write....
If anyone ever trys to tell us whys,
let's nail him to a cross,
I can see how some would not like this piece at all. Many of us like to cling to our own narrow minded versions of the why, and when differing versions of why are presented, how so many seem to quickly rise up in anger yelling, "How Dare You Question Our Version of Why!"
In humankind we grow from a baby and discover how to live from day to day and eventually learn the basic facts of how we reproduce but acknowledge we know nothing about why we are here.
Yes, we know for certain we are here even though we acknowledge we're not at all sure of where "here" is. And all the while we gawk with eyes of wonder at our small child's repeated question: "Why?"
"Hush, now! Children should be seen and not heard."
What're the sayings? "Ignorance is bliss. Don't rock the boat."
"Our hows and whys" is an insightful and profound work in words we ordinary mortals can understand.
I agree with you: when is man going to stop playing God and giving recognition to the One Who created all? Excellent. They did nail Jesus to the Cross, but thank God, He rose again! Well done.
Why? The mantra of a child - always accepted, but eventually the "because I said so" becomes the response. Sadly, that response continues throughout our life. Why?
Great insight and profound. I truly liked it!
Kathy
I could hug you! Why... are so view ... asking that question?...
not only that you have written a very insisive deep analogy to the most intriquing question, you have written it in the best of prose... Kudos my friend... You are a very deep spiritual person, write more of the same, and nail it on every door. Blessings!
Jasmin Horst
Oh, wow, Jerry. Very powerful poem. I can see why some may not have liked it, but you must write what is inside you, make sense of your world, your way, and make no appologies about it. Personally I liked it. Especially the last four lines.
Jean
These song lyrics and art are tales, tides and twinkling lights - tunes telling stories of warmth and sun, city and sand, paths that lead, and the coins we can keep in the Karma Bank. Spirit's been bypassed for sorrow, dreaming of a better tomorrow .
These song lyrics and art are tales, tides and twinkling lights - tunes telling stories of warmth and sun, city and sand, paths that lead, and the coins we can keep in the Karma Bank. Spirit's been bypassed for sorrow, dreaming of a better tomorrow .
From the Caribbean Sea to Machu Picchu in Peru, and from birds to flowers and butterflies, Reflections and Treasured Wonders offers a collection of images gathered from around the world.
strong write on what we really don't want to see or know
it's real and people don't like reality
most people
glad you put it out there!!!
Be safe,
Karen
let's nail him to a cross,
I can see how some would not like this piece at all. Many of us like to cling to our own narrow minded versions of the why, and when differing versions of why are presented, how so many seem to quickly rise up in anger yelling, "How Dare You Question Our Version of Why!"
Yes, we know for certain we are here even though we acknowledge we're not at all sure of where "here" is. And all the while we gawk with eyes of wonder at our small child's repeated question: "Why?"
"Hush, now! Children should be seen and not heard."
What're the sayings? "Ignorance is bliss. Don't rock the boat."
"Our hows and whys" is an insightful and profound work in words we ordinary mortals can understand.
In admiration,
Richard
I agree with you: when is man going to stop playing God and giving recognition to the One Who created all? Excellent. They did nail Jesus to the Cross, but thank God, He rose again! Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Great insight and profound. I truly liked it!
Kathy
not only that you have written a very insisive deep analogy to the most intriquing question, you have written it in the best of prose... Kudos my friend... You are a very deep spiritual person, write more of the same, and nail it on every door. Blessings!
Jasmin Horst
Jean