Beautiful, heart felt and grateful with a hint of sadness. Awesome. Love it. Liz
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2011
This is so incredibly beautiful. I relate so well to the feelings that well between these words. You have used "mercy" in such a prayerful and sincere way that one cannot help but to want to reach across time and space and soothe the pain. Your word choices are wonderful and when read aloud, your sounds are emollient to the soul...especially that wonderful "s" sound in your last stanza. Beautiful, Jerry!
Another work that touches us all with your unique observations of the physical world around us even as we pray to share the Mercy of blessed sleep to awaken once more surrounded by Love and the ones we cherish in our heart.
And I am so thankful to be flooded with the love of family and, especially, my Dearest Jodi, with whom I have shared all of life
for nearly sixty-four years.
Happy Thanksgiving, Jerry, and to your beloved Belinda.
The spiritual dimension of a forthcoming celebration,
'Mercy' a fine choice for central thought.
It's good to see you again, Jerry, it's been much too long.
This is truly a lovely, apt, timely, and splendid poetic gift for Thanksgiving, Jerry. Ours is in October but your poem is relevant at all times anywhere. Love and peace to you,
You have outdone yourself, Jerry! This is simply breathtaking... You left me with tears in my eyes under the summer stars I used to dream under while the bullfrogs sang their mating songs.
I've missed you my friend. Hope you have a splendiforous Thanksgiving.
Cryssa :~)
You leave us all with a most beautiful and touching poem, a poem that will always touch every human experience. You'll be a poet on the other side, I am certain that Mercy has heard your soul song, and will be with you. You strung a ladder of pearls, of words, and wisdom, and feeling, and someone will surely hold the other end, to help you up, for you are a treasure to them, as you are to us.
Bless you always friend, and bon voyage, say hello to our friend Mark Twain will ya. Love and peace! Jasmin Horst
GLIMPSE OF AN ANGEL IS NOW AVAILABLE. A PORTION OF ALL SALES WILL GO TO HOSPICE TO THUS ENABLE THEM TO HELP OTHERS WHO ARE SOON TO PASS TO THE OTHER SIDE. NO LONGER AVAILABLE.
well said!
And I am so thankful to be flooded with the love of family and, especially, my Dearest Jodi, with whom I have shared all of life
for nearly sixty-four years.
Happy Thanksgiving, Jerry, and to your beloved Belinda.
Richard
'Mercy' a fine choice for central thought.
It's good to see you again, Jerry, it's been much too long.
John
Regis
I've missed you my friend. Hope you have a splendiforous Thanksgiving.
Cryssa :~)
Bless you always friend, and bon voyage, say hello to our friend Mark Twain will ya. Love and peace! Jasmin Horst