Surreal Summer Scenes~Jude /Eileen (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 15, 2005

This is a beautiful collaboration, though the last verse nearly sounds like a farewell to all that came before. It seems that within all the bonded emotion there is a sense of Autumn and impending Winter tearing at the shared emotions. Relationships do have their seasons, very few are able to bridge all. Wonderful collaboration, smooth and well blended. You two should write together more. Your poetry sings.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on September 4, 2004

very lovely

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on August 19, 2004

AAAWWWEEEE,so beautiful and so romantic too,I loved this.
Best wishes always
from
kay

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Dear Eileen and Jude,

Fantastic collaboration you two!!! :) outstanding poetry, you work well together. A beautiful romantic and mystical feel about this write, the whole poem is exquisite. Kudos to you both.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

What a wonderful duo you two make! This was so lovely and romantic, excellent collaboration!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

I saw you on the beach today
Even though I was not there

Marvelous, and what a poetic team!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

This is just outstanding. Love your collaborations.

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Excellent and very sensual collaboration.
Bravo !

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Fabulous collaboration, words penned with such highly charged emotions, a delight to read....best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Perfected poetry from two of the best Poets! Magnificent collaboration!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on August 17, 2004

Okay you two neede no heat for this beach this is such a sensual and moving piece of beautiful emoption and scenery love all of it Brava SMILES>>>>>>

LP

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

Like two rivers of love, your waters inject fresh vitality to flowers growing in the AD romantic gardens.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

You two do some good writing.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

This is really a wonderful piece you two. Excellent in each interchange.
Allen

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

like how you thru that cosmic in there ei, that makes my day :) ty ei al

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

Magically captivating verse. Very much enjoyed!

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

You too should team up more often...this is a great poem...it provided me with great images...very thoroughly enjoyed...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

A truly wondrous pairing and a superb poem. Thrilled to have read it. Trish.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

Yes very sweet and harmonic collaboration Jude and Eileen...
Seemingly effortless and spontaneous..
A joy of a duet..
Peter

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

not bad ;)

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

This is a beauty.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

The soft-flowing mental immages seem to quiet the busy day I had.
Beautiful work from both of you

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

This is a successful collaboration. The poem (and the music) is a feast for the senses. I guessed at what parts were written by Eileen and what by Jude and would be interested in knowing if I hit or miss. Pray tell.
Congratulations to you both...
Chanti

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

WOW!!! Some of the "pairing up of poets" on The Den...is
nothing short of spectacular...as these lines prove!

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

Exquisite

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

Very good write. Togetherness is always a creative adventure. You two have proved this!
Susan

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on August 16, 2004

Lovely, Eileen. A sweet collaboration. :-)